The way I see my writing is that I like to use alot of word plays and rhymes, which sometimes makes my poems look like they should be in "Roses are Red Violets are Blue" format (lol which I might try if I run out of ideas). I also write about the most random things whatever im thinking about when I'm sitting here or a dream I had who knows. If nothing else it should give all you good writers on here some1 to make fun of.
I love to write even if I wasnt posting on here I would still be writing and its even better that I can get my stuff read and commented on, and if You see anything in my writing that needs to be brought to my attention bring it up im just starting out and I could use the criticism.
~Dont handle with words, what u can fix with a flamethrower ~
~This situation requires a subtle blend of psychology and extreme violence~
~Always remember when someone is bothering you it takes 41 muscles in the face to frown, but it only takes 2 to lift your arm and B***hslap dat mafu****~
Oh and by the way ~IF YOU READ MY POEMS PLEASE CRITIQUE THEM!~
I love to write even if I wasnt posting on here I would still be writing and its even better that I can get my stuff read and commented on, and if You see anything in my writing that needs to be brought to my attention bring it up im just starting out and I could use the criticism.
~Dont handle with words, what u can fix with a flamethrower ~
~This situation requires a subtle blend of psychology and extreme violence~
~Always remember when someone is bothering you it takes 41 muscles in the face to frown, but it only takes 2 to lift your arm and B***hslap dat mafu****~
Oh and by the way ~IF YOU READ MY POEMS PLEASE CRITIQUE THEM!~
- Last seen on Mar 22 1:20 PM 2008. Member since August 15, 2003.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 94 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "0".
- I am a 22 year old guy (USA)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Satiric mastermind.
- Visit my homepage at www.geocities.com/praetorian41408/ma_page.html?1024249092680
- I have 94 comments, 21 poems
My Poetry
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While my thoughts wonder as I sit with nothing to do
my minds eyes gaze falls on a warm iridescent hue14 lines, 4 comments, December 14, 2003. In Other -
I haven't been able to write for nearly a week
I'm starting to think my brain has a leak13 lines, 5 comments, December 9, 2003. In Other
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NeuroticAngel on April 27, 2004:| yeah so what, no need for name calling .. i was just stating the facts
.. nah i get on everyone and a ahiwle but your not on when i am so well.. timing is everything i guess.. -
NeuroticAngel on April 24, 2004hey butt muncher, i just wanted to leave you a message on here to say hello since i dont see you online anymore maybe you will talk to me on here lol, well i hope that things are going good for you and that you are doing good, i dont seem to talk to you much anymore so i never know what is going with you, well take care and see ya around *always Nikki.. oh yeah your a hooker
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twisted butterfly on December 6, 2003you still suck fucker lol
kisses
Lisa x -
twisted butterfly on November 30, 2003oh you suck. i log in. you log out. haha
hope to catch up with you soon trav.
Lisa x
