I write my poetry based on what I feel, no thought goes into what I write, it just comes out, and flows onto the paper. I write anywhere and everywhere, whenever I have a feeling and I need to expose it, I write a poem. Poems are my thoughts that flow from my heart and my head. they may not be very good, but I am young and, I dont write for entertainment I write becasue it is my form of expression. It helps me to deal with my feelings, and to put them into words. In a way, poetry is my escape. Please critique my work, I hope to learn and prosper from correction. I am only 15, and I have been in love. I have been hurt, and have experienced many things at such a young age. Sometimes I may not knwo how to deal with those advaced emotions, so I write a poem. Please enjoy, and tell me honestly what you think of my work.thank you.
- Last seen on Apr 15 2:18 AM 2007. Member since November 13, 2006.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 87 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Life is short dont waste it regretting the past".
- I am a 15 year old girl from Michigan (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm hardworking student.
- I have 87 comments, 1 contest, 34 poems
My Poetry
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I’m not strong and I’m not brave
I’ll close my eyes, and let you lead65 lines, 4 comments, February 6, 2007. In personal love sad -
its about a lover and how every moment we share is heaven and hell.34 lines, 1 comment, January 23, 2007. In contest
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Cold weather isn’t all that gives me chills as the Christmas season comes to life
I think it’s slightly ridiculous, husbands spending milli60 lines, 3 comments, December 12, 2006. In society
Guest Book
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Death of the Author on November 15, 2006I agree it does have to come from the heart. It can't be forced..it comes across as..unnatural? But good job on all your writes so far, thank you for reading and commenting :]
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Death of the Author on November 15, 2006I am also 15..and I've seen other people been through a lot so I guess it has affected me too. I like the way you write, I like poems from the heart, there can be no other kind I feel. On another note we just read..well are reading To Kill A Mockingbird in english..and that is quite a random thing to say but as it is ur favourtie book..then..ill be quiet now :]
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bluejeans51 on November 14, 2006Well let your penmanship out there. Good Luck and welcome to all poetry.com
