Hi, I'm tara
I'm 13 years old
I live in Long Island, NY
In a reallyreally overpopulated town.
I'm not here to make anyone's life miserable,
Just here to be a girl, have a little fun,
But still act appropriate for my age.
I live my life to the fullest & i've learned not to
Take advantage of things I have.
I write about things that mostly happen to me ;
My true life experiences..
And Oh, I know- My spelling and Grammar SUCKS.
But I use spell-check, because believe me,
If I didn't, my work wouldn't be understandable...
(if thats even a word)
Teehee, anyway..
Pleasepleaseplease, don't critique my work saying..
"wow you suck" or anyting obnoxious like that
You can tell me you didn't like it that much, or
that you don't like my style, but don't be obvious about it.
..Because I don't do that to any of you !
Anyway, please read my work, critique if you can!
Oh& I don't really add poems as much anymore,
I only update my poetry, etc. ever few weeks, so um..yeah
Bye!
x0x - tara.
I'm 13 years old
I live in Long Island, NY
In a reallyreally overpopulated town.
I'm not here to make anyone's life miserable,
Just here to be a girl, have a little fun,
But still act appropriate for my age.
I live my life to the fullest & i've learned not to
Take advantage of things I have.
I write about things that mostly happen to me ;
My true life experiences..
And Oh, I know- My spelling and Grammar SUCKS.
But I use spell-check, because believe me,
If I didn't, my work wouldn't be understandable...
(if thats even a word)
Teehee, anyway..
Pleasepleaseplease, don't critique my work saying..
"wow you suck" or anyting obnoxious like that
You can tell me you didn't like it that much, or
that you don't like my style, but don't be obvious about it.
..Because I don't do that to any of you !
Anyway, please read my work, critique if you can!
Oh& I don't really add poems as much anymore,
I only update my poetry, etc. ever few weeks, so um..yeah
Bye!
x0x - tara.
- Last seen on Mar 4 3:41 PM 2007. Member since January 9, 2005.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 260 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "i don't want a motto.".
- I am a 13 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a human being..
- Visit my homepage at www.xanga.com/love_like_gravity
- I am in the groups Girl Interrupted
- I have 260 comments, 1 addline, 80 poems, 1 story
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This is my whole diary from my vacation from July 30th - August 17th in the Philippines. There are spelling mistakes, but I didn`t bother changing them because I didn`t want to1132 lines, August 23, 2005. In <200 lines, Other
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PaintedParisPassion on January 18, 2006Thanks Much for the comment of my poem, im glad you could relate, and even more so that you like it, keep writing and stay strong, dont let other people like criticize you. You're an amazing writer.
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Shadow Rule on December 4, 2005Yo i just read your poem and i just wanted to say you used alot of feeling in it. That's good becuase the feelings we humans have help us to get past areselfs. If you got that lmao, got give up keep writen
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BlackXTearYxEyesX on September 12, 2005hey i read alot of ur stuff its really gud great job!n people prob dont critic u all da time cause they juz dont get to c ur stuff but if they did im sure they would cause it awsome!
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