Hallo;
I am 16 and have now been writing for 4 years. I enjoy writing because i do enjoy poetry but wish i could write it well. I don't really write poems often anymore because i can never get past writing 5 or 6 lines. Another problem i have is i can never write about what i have in my mind becasue it never comes out how i want it to.
I would love to go into poetry as a career but i am nowhere near good enough!
If you could leave a comment on my poems i would very much appreciate it as i will know what i am doing right and what i am doing not so good in
thanks
x
I am 16 and have now been writing for 4 years. I enjoy writing because i do enjoy poetry but wish i could write it well. I don't really write poems often anymore because i can never get past writing 5 or 6 lines. Another problem i have is i can never write about what i have in my mind becasue it never comes out how i want it to.
I would love to go into poetry as a career but i am nowhere near good enough!
If you could leave a comment on my poems i would very much appreciate it as i will know what i am doing right and what i am doing not so good in
thanks x
- Last seen on Nov 5 3:32 PM. Member since June 18, 2006.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 253 comments.
- I am a 16 year old girl (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- I have 253 comments, 1 contest, 1 addline, 113 poems, 1 story
My Poetry
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The fright builds up the anticipation even more,
Adds to the effect,27 lines, 1 comment, November 5 -
The unknowing of whether you are coming or you are going,
And the feeling of disbelief in oneself.29 lines, 3 comments, October 22
My Stories
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The piercing sounds of tires filled the atmosphere. The wind clobbering at my face, Hair everywhere, I can’t see. This monster of a wind was hurling itself right at me. Painfully I struggled, pushing my body up towards it. Th581 lines, April 24, 2008. In <600 words
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Naznomarn on March 17, 2008Lol yuuuh it's something to boast about though!! Your writings be goooood
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Naznomarn on September 26, 2007Hiiii Tigs You need to write more!
What's up?
Anything I can help withhh?
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HoldMe on August 1, 2007ain't been up to much...been really busy this summer...a writing camp, a missionary thingamajigger in Birmingham, Alabama and a christian camp. least I haven't been bored
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HoldMe on July 1, 2007long time no speak ahem *pokes*
