From time to time I try to write Haiku. These are my efforts. I am sure that I will not meet the Ideal in all cases. So you specialist out there tell me which ones are wrong and why. I always want to learn. Yet I like to write the standard 575 format. And yes i use it to say things not necessarily traditional in them.
But I am studying up on the more perferred methods of
Haiku purists.
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i took my dog out
a little while ago57 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 4 9:36 PM 2007. In life in 3 lines. -
6 lines, 5 comments, on May 8 11:58 PM 2007
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4 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 6 11:10 PM 2007
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20 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 10:25 PM 2007. In Thoughts
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2 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 23 11:24 PM 2007
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26 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 28 10:28 PM 2007. In Thoughts
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heart times come often.
if you listen, truly feel.19 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 22 11:00 PM 2007 -
lemmings to a cliff.
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love is a lost art. sharing is never mentioned.22 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 26 11:44 PM 2007
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deny your own heart. accept another's judgment.16 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 2 10:29 PM 2007
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be very careful,
little lies have such long legs18 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 2 10:32 PM 2007 -
15 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 11:35 PM 2007
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2 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 8 6:21 PM 2007
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35 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 1 11:09 PM 2007. In haiku
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20 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 2 10:59 PM 2007
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Thanks to Cannonsfire for giving me all these words to play with. smile.I wrote them down.
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5 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 5 9:24 PM 2007
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15 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 25 7:40 AM 2008. In Nature
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