These are poems that have few comments. Feedback, and constructive critique is so necessary to become a better poet. Please read and give honest comments.
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Wonder what an easel does
when paint won't tint -
Refusing to rain treasures down
but wells water up to meet tears -
I smell death
strewn in the cot next to me
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lifted up, flight spins me into the midst of all
looking down makes me nauseous, nervous, vain -
where faeries funnel into darkness
and blend with the Earth's foundation
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Dipped in sheer chiffon
are whispers of angels -
There is a sense of lasting peace resting here
With comfy quilt, lemonade, and good cheer -
lunar like a night light
plugged into a socket -
Only possibility was true love
Each chance I got I knew was from above19 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 15 9:28 PM 2007
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Not a thing halts her energy
Throttle of six stars within her grasp28 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 30 12:28 PM 2007. In Spiritual
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where foundation's magic
spent spectacular spells
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give me wisdom
I don't invite -
Not knowing the decisions I had made
Altered my set destiny, tempered my course -
Sweet scents of dew
rearrange the moment,67 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 2 8:37 AM 2007. In Nature
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frantically searching
no strings -
like the vapor from my cold lips
on a January eve55 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 10:33 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Thoughts -
Well suited is this grand parade,
for tykes know nothing of charade. -
For your thunderous arms
enrapture my being32 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 19 11:23 PM. In Poet's Challenge -
dipping into maroon ink
outlines of genius painted in words -
Then saw the Light, was bright as could be.
Answers to prayers were inside of me. -
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There is lightning
blazing it's mark across jet -
rinse clean path
of muddied mirror reflection -
soft winds that blend
your thoughts with mine -
there was nothing wrong
with making others feel pleasure
38 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 7 6:12 PM. In Personal, Contemporary -
Grandmother lived in the valley
with the rest of the kin, -
Each new twilight engulfs my spirit
and ushers me into another season -
I stand before you
in the presence of all -
For Love is never self-contained
Nor does it entertain deceit
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I had to chuckle at this one:
I have plenty with less than 3 comments or less and so I came to oblige you with my comments only to find that you don't have the first one! Ain't you lucky! joy
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lol
nice list
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I started this list about two months ago, and my computer crashed. I thought that might be an omen not to post those poems. 
Renee
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Thanks to good intention people like you my friend, this list wouldn't stay up long anyway. LOL Thanks for the support!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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maybe I also need a list like this considering my load of material I've posted...LOL
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I have not gotten around to adding those poems yet! I was rummaging through my work back then, and came across lots of poetry with three comments or less. I had great intentions to add them at the time. LOL
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Hee hee well to be quite constructive miss renee you are a wonderful poet and I am being honest when I say I was surprise when I seen three comments or less because you have a community of friends and family here at AP and I am sure not a one would miss reading something penned from your soul!
Twinzy
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