Poems dedicated to Alyshia Davis(in the pic)...my Black Monday.
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Black Monday: Resurrection
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Black Monday: Epilogue
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Nightmare Beauty
The 'original' part 4 to the series which was later shelved for the rewrite listed above.
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In romance, in suspense
The daunting hero comes to our defense
Written as part of the redo to the series this was added as the 'prequel' if you will to black monday pt. ii.
This is *the* original poem that spawned all the rest of this poetic mess, strictly unedited and unaltered, copied word for word from the old beat up pen and paper original script...
Another of the redo additions to the series written for cohesion and continuity between pieces but still very much a part of the series in concept and plot.
This is acutally part of the original series of poems along with 'pt. ii'. this may not be word for word from the original script but its pretty damn close from what i can remember.
The rewritten and totally epic finale, unlike the original ending listed below, this kept the male point of view and went in great and graphic detail of the final moments of black monday. this comes to closest of all the written herein to representing the visuals i had at the conception of this story idea...the very embodyment of black monday.
Not really a finale as much as the previous installment this was more of a closure piece to tie the final knot of the loose ends and settle all the dust.
The original part 5 and finale to the series, i was very dissapointed at the closing moments and the title i placed it with. it seemed that this piece just did not fit the original vision i had and how i wanted to convey it to the world. thus 'resurrection' was written, which wasnt a far cry from this piece in form and concept/plot...and acutally not far of a cry from the very first wrriten piece (now titled 'pt, ii').
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ok black monkey ur weird
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