Retourne:
Like so many other French forms, the Retourne is all about repetition. It contains four quatrains (four-line stanzas), and each line has eight syllables. The trick is that the first stanza's second line must also be the second stanza's first line, the first stanza's third line is the third stanza's first, and the first stanza's fourth line is the fourth stanza's first. Retournes do not have to rhyme.
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Let's make a life together.
Make two footprints instead of one.32 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 13 10:12 PM 2008. In Love -
I know the roar of wild flames.
They have burned deep in memories.33 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 14 3:48 PM 2008 -
To love we must open to pain.
We are addicts needing to touch21 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 23 9:17 AM 2008. In Love -
I walk towards the sound of water.
Mountain pine allures my nose.32 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 23 9:55 AM 2008. In Nature -
There are rivers that flow through me
I have come from many waters. -
There are remains of you and I,
sparkling prisms on the floor.26 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 13 2:59 AM 2008. In Love -
I ask God questions in the night.
Is there a heaven or a hell?30 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 24 12:07 PM 2008. In Spiritual -
I walk out into a warm rain.
Looking up I feel the drops fall. -
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Here I am bleeding once again
Those words "I don't love you." echo28 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 17 9:54 AM. In Love -
If you call on me I will come
with the swiftness of an eagle.29 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 17 10:18 AM. In Love
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