WITTIAN RHYME FORM STRUCTURE
'The wittian form?...very simple grasshopper....Twenty lines,ten rhyming couplets,Syllable count does not matter but the word count is very specific....1st couplet 2 words,2nd couplet 5 words,3rd couplet 1 word,4th couplet 4 words,5th&6th couplets 3words....then back the other way...7th couplet 4 words,8th couplet 1 word,9th couplet 5 words...then the last couplet is reversed so it ends just as it begins....sounds hard but after you do it a couple of times it's a piece of cake...and I have found you can write any mood with this form....angst,dark,love.ect........There you have it...give it a shot and tell me what you think ok?'Punctuations are only used to break a line ,but not to end a line,the words themselves act as their own punctuations... added successfully
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Nice flowers
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Sunset fading
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Make love
My dove -
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Ice cream
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Honored treasures
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It’s raining
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Taking photos
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Wanting you
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Brotherly love
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Talking online
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Someone’s smile
Seemed worthwhile -
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Spilt tears / Battling fears / Never knowing what’s in store / Holding back, hoping for more / Destroyed / Annoyed / Bad news always follow
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/ Everybody’s fool / Useless tool / It seems I’m always wrong / No longer am I strong / Betrayed / Dismayed / Watch this love begin / Cros
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Your in
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Sweet emotion / Total devotion / Dreaming of time with you / Touching feeling and kissing too / Sharing / Caring / Looking forward to this / Your company, I’ve missed / Been to long / Since you’ve gone / M
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Mother’s heart / Torn apart / When my child ran away / Chooses elsewhere to now stay / Confused / Abused / Wondering what to do / Trying to21 lines, 11 comments, on May 27 11:36 PM 2007
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Tainted ink / Suicide brink / There’s nothing left for me / No longer am I free / Blood / Flood / Wanting just to die / Not needing your re21 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 10 9:14 AM 2007
