This is going to be a series of free verse poems about the
three brothers battle with evil and amongst themselves in their struggle to find the capotured maiden.
As I go forward with this, I will indeed describe the brothers. I just wrote two but after reading the feedback, I am going to do a spot on each brother and the maiden.
Wow!! I did not think I would get this sort of feedback. I thank you for that. Actually, this started as a homework assignment and went from there, based on a girl and three brothers I personally know very well. These are not written on fact but all three brothers did love her and she did indeed love one with all of her heart and soul. Can you figure out which one it is? Before it ends?
to be continued
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Three Brother'sSharp cold ice coming together To meet at the crossroads of lifeFearing not46 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 20 5:40 PM 2006. In Love
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With the clanging of their vows spoken
The trio flash forward in time69 lines, on Feb 21 12:05 AM 2006. In Other
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