Latest Favorite Comments/Critiques on Me Box
2007-2008:
"You got your Shakespearean from the Internet?"
"This didn't do anything for me."
"This made me feel, dare I say, 'warmth'."
"This is the best bedtime story poem I've ever read!"
"Silly and sad, true black humor."
"Unique is an understatement!"
"...rated your comment 5 stars..."
"I know you can do better."
"A true ballad."
"You have failed to deliver."
"It's not 'Frauline' but 'Fräulein'".
"as a dental hygienist i smile."
"it's still pretty melancholy...but it's really coming along...it's starting to grow on me...it's still like nothing I've EVER seen though." (-comment on a musical score of mine...)
"Why the diatribe?"
"I wanted more meataphor...!"
"This is a no-no."
"I was rivited."
"Well you can say you set a record. You had me, Kimberly, and Bel all bawling* today, with each other and individually. We love you and each other. What a connection! This is beauteous!" *and laughing (auth. note)
"Thank you so much Wayne for your comment. You have no idea what this means to me... your attention for me made me already 90% better. Thank you so much! I haven't smiled for a long time here, but by talking to you and reading your poetry I do laugh and smile again.  How can I ever thank you for that?"
"This poem is so YOU. It made me laugh."
"I'm truly sorry wbiro but, it must be my age, as this is beyond me."
"Haha...that picture just makes me smile...it's so silly but that's why I love it!"
"This is very unusual for me not at all what I am used to. I found it very hard to wrap my head around. It is way beyond my comprehention."
"Kinda suspect." (jealous boyfriend over a romantic write! -auth)
"WoWeeee this is really exausting to read, you tire me out by your hyperness!"
"Wow- this is one of the most unique story-poems I've ever read on here. And the flow was flawless, and loved the quick pace."
"very sophisticated, non-cliche dirty pretty, and just beautifully poetic"
"LOL if someone could actually pull that off now that would be quite impressive." (and I did -auth.)
"OH MY ROTFLMAOOOOOOO....Gawwwwwd your silly."
"this is hysterical"
"Blitherin' Good fun!"
"I cant say that I understand this but it is well written."
"You write so eloquently, I do not doubt, not for a moment that someone, would love to publish these."
"You have the knack of tossing out random looking, nonchalant words that are sneakily polished to perfection."
"Ak! I love this! It's so pretty!"
"Why you wanna make me cry and I have a headache."
"you have been missed..."
"I KNEW you would think of something sweetie!"
"I absolutely love the metaphors."
"That's the kind of random humour I love..."
"Well...that was rude." (and later) "Lol This was great. I was laughing all the way through. So that is why you were all like that!"
"Oh no! This is too funny! Haha...now my day is much better!"
"oh this is so sadly written..."
"Well, I came by again to see how this was doing...everything is great...do you have bowings in the strings or no?"
"Interesting. The word choice in this was quite complex, and I liked that about it."
"The story was rather shallow, no internal meaning to me..."
"Sorry but I just can't get to like this..."
"I am sure the finished product will be mind boggling."
"This works for me in the spirit of experiment & avant-garde deconstruction..."
"For some reason the music made me think "Rhapsody in Blue" gone wrong...REALLY wrong...!"
"OMG, I am rolling on the floor here... whooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!"
"OMG...I was too SHOCKED by the changes to my music that I couldn't read the poem..."
"One would perhaps consider the intrinsic subject/object dichotomy between..."
"I will tell you I don't get it..."
"Different so different I am not sure about this at all."
"I do not think it is bad poetry, I just wonder, is it poetry..."
"I looked at the number of lines and thought...no friggin way I'm gonna read this all. Then I did."
"but it was so irritating scrolling down...lol..but absolutely love the poem..."
"This was quite a different message from what I expected..."
"you tied my head in a knot...bravo"
"Yes!!! How you cleaned up the end was absolutely beautiful!!!"
"I suppose it means you are a Virgo?"
"good grief wbiro lol"
"I see you're up to your usual, unusual tricks, Poet."
"Great write despite the typos."
"It's a bit over the 30 lines I asked for (over 3 times that even)..."
"I think Ellis will like it, that's all that matters."
"I rather enjoy the words as they fall euphonously on the ear without the recording..."
"the pictures are distracting and the whole is merely complicated by the glossary in the notes."
"ag you are the best!!! Thank you for your comments!!!! English not my first Language, makes it hard to write sometimes..."
"Not for me I am afraid on reflection."
"Suddenly I feel like singing fado, and dancing the flamenco."
"The pictures were so pretty! And the poetry of course too. ^_^"
"You are the first person I've ever mentioned Vietnam to..."
"I am sorry for spelling your name wrong. your name is like a set of broken teeth, not a train."
five comments that together closely sum me up:
"Well, I have never seen nor read poetry this way."
"Oh, my...I am stunned by the melancholy beauty of this."
"A brilliant melange of astro-physics, robotics, hard-core SF and human emotions."
 Oh my gawd but you are a bad boy! This is too funny!
"I love spongebob!"
2004-2006:
“LMAO!”
“Brillant!” (sp!)
“Geanious!” (sp!)
“Beuatiful!” (sp!)
"Priceless!"
"Yes, dream lover..."
“Is love real?”
“Thanks Dad!”
“pounces on ya!”
“You're too funny!”
“How dare you!?”
“You're on vacation again?”
“I never knew that!”
"You don't know me!"
“You give me hope.”
“You disappoint me.”
“ok I am confused now.”
“lol don’t u ever sleep?”
"I want a divorce..."
"Hi, Uncle! (tackles you!)"
“lol ty..are u in yahoo?”
"This was not your best effort..."
"I was sad But you fixed that!"
“OMG no fighting please!!”
“ G'night, Poet... ”
"Ah Beloved One, you make me so excited!"
“You're logical is fatally flawed.”
“u are like a second dad to me!”
“be careful my mama vampira bites.”
"I miss your funny free spirit poems."
"thanx love, and pleasant nightmares"
“A 100% masterpiece of perfection!”
“you can also call me a Guinness buddy.”
"I want to be just like you, only a chick!"
“You sang that yourself? That Tarzan thing?”
"you let your emotions run wild in this piece."
"Kisses and teardrops overflow on this page!"
“At least your cheering section seems to like it.”
"You have outdone Poe and his 'Raven' with this!"
"You live in such a small world. You must be sad."
“This is terrible. Come back in a year and try again.”
“It gave a glimpse into a hopeful Internet romance.”
“Typical Male! LOL …clothes kicked off on the floor...”
"This is the stuff that made me fall in love with poetry."
“If I were you I’d spend most my time at the bar, too!”
“I found this to be extremely condescending and weak.”
“can you do me a fave- pleaseeeeeeeee- can you read this…!”
“My dear you are so kind and sweet. You make giving so easy.”
“i didnt like it at all...i just read it cuz the title seemed interesting...”
"I'm proud to say I've given my so-far best comment in AP to you !"
“Thank you big brother, I needed that ounce of brotherly love today!”
"OMG, that is SO beautiful. I love this and damn it you made me cry."
“LOL I loved how serious this all was up to the very end of the poem!”
"Specks of brilliance shine through at perfect moments in this piece..."
“You’re pathetic, girlyman. Collecting girls to satisfy your ego. Get off this site!”
“daddyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!”
“Wow. This is one of the most beautiful poems about silence that I have read.”
"OH WOW. This is so beautiful I think I am gonna cry {wipes tears} K, I am over it"
“You are too silly! This is so funny. What an imagination you have. You must be bored…”
“woow...you definatly need to take some of that stuff off....your athor page...”
“hello,how are you?having homacidal thoughts??Please, if you do, shoot me!!!!”
“I’m sure you would have made a great MOD- your very much a people person.”
“...the lesson of being able to hold onto life for the sake of others. Very nice.”
"she said to tell you that you were a great competitor, and that she had fun winning!"
“When the words come from you, I don’t need music. You are amazing, and were as well my first AP love.”
"Your vivid imagery brings this tryst to life and causes even the prudish to stand erect with wanton lust!"
“you always find that special place to touch, my friend, within the heart! I look at this and I smile!”
"lovely heartfelt poem filled with deep sadness and yearning. I hope this is not from personal experience."
“I like your romantic the best, 2nd best is intellectual. 3rd silly (because then I often don't understand you).”
"You display a playful, mocking tone in some of these lines, but you are also able to turn on a dime and turn deadly serious..."
"Lovely personification of a table and set of chairs. So imaginative!!! All I can say is...wish I had thought of that first..."
“you are a nice intelligent silly man, but you have a heart as well. All these things made you what you are today. Beware not to become conceited about it.”
“The following has been removed from your author page and a poem has been deleted… We reserve the right to delete excessively disturbing posts… please DO NOT re-post them. AP...”
"What was it that left me feeling your loneliness I wonder? Somehow this little piece has the power to break your heart, with its wanting and need... Soft smile for you my friend.. It is beautiful."
“Let's get something out here ok.....I can drink most men under a table, my mouth can make a sailor blush, bugs don't bother me, fishing is relaxing, I can hold my own in tackle football, I get sucked into hack em' and slash em' horrors (the more gore the better), I love a good steak, and I am almost impossible to offend.”
“You are very talented you know, but you are NOT at all serious in your writing, which is such a pity. Instead of writing beautiful poems (which you can - I have read a few), you are always joking and coming up with laughable things. This is so sad, for I know you can do 100 times better. Please, try to be more serious. Show yourself a real poet.”
“There are times when you pen a piece and I think to myself, you write with such power and intensity and emotion, I could read your works all day long. You are among a select few writer's that I know that puts everything that is within you, into your poems. Not just bits and pieces... EVERYTHING. When you pour out your heart, such as you have done here… I swear even the angels must surely hush their singing so they too can absorb the wonder of you. You have such amazing talent that just shines and spews forth at times...”
"OMG uncle wbiro. I was feeling really emotional and depressed before I went to sleep and I was so overwhelmed by all this studying and then i thought I would check my messages before I went to sleep and I saw the link you sent me.
"Vertigang Llama Brahma"
I laughed and laughed like there was no tomorrow. You really are something. I really love it.
Tell Brahma that me and Vishnu say hi
[[sits on Vishnu and prances away]]
HIHO SILVER!! AWAY!!!
Love you uncle"
"hahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahaha
brother, my brother hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I have never found so much joy and laughter in my life, except laughing here in AP! hahahahahahahahahahaha
Thank you so much for making me laugh and the happiness that I felt which of course, I am laughing like a crazy woman here at work! hahahahahaha Thanks to you, they are thinking here that I am taking wacki tobacki because I keep on laughing in front of my laptop! hahahahahahahahahahaha! Priceless! You are one of a kind dear brother and I'm hoping that someday all of us in the sisterhood will meet you in person and we will all laugh to death! hahahahahahaha !"
Favorite Exchange:
Me: "You've written a fine depiction of an AP romance, the long build up, the electric meeting, the release, that for most of us it will remain pure fantasy... lol"
"What makes you think it is something from AP? LOL.. I don't tell my secrets..."
"Well, I was going to say Internet romance, but nothing even comes close to AP!"
"Well like I said, I don't reveal my secrets....LOL...but you are right!"
AND THE GRAND FINALE:
“thanks Dad! You really helped my day start off with a smile!”
Moral of the Story: Life is no piece of cake here on AP!
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