Latest Favorite Comments/Critiques on Me Box
2007-2008:
"You got your Shakespearean from the Internet?" "This didn't do anything for me." "This made me feel, dare I say, 'warmth'." "This is the best bedtime story poem I've ever read!" "Silly and sad, true black humor." "Unique is an understatement!" "...rated your comment 5 stars..." "I know you can do better." "A true ballad." "You have failed to deliver." "It's not 'Frauline' but 'Fräulein'". "as a dental hygienist i smile." "it's still pretty melancholy...but it's really coming along...it's starting to grow on me...it's still like nothing I've EVER seen though." (-comment on a musical score of mine...) "Why the diatribe?" "I wanted more meataphor...!" "This is a no-no." "I was rivited." "Well you can say you set a record. You had me, Kimberly, and Bel all bawling* today, with each other and individually. We love you and each other. What a connection! This is beauteous!" *and laughing (auth. note) "Thank you so much Wayne for your comment. You have no idea what this means to me... your attention for me made me already 90% better. Thank you so much! I haven't smiled for a long time here, but by talking to you and reading your poetry I do laugh and smile again. "This poem is so YOU. It made me laugh." "I'm truly sorry wbiro but, it must be my age, as this is beyond me." "Haha...that picture just makes me smile...it's so silly but that's why I love it!" "This is very unusual for me not at all what I am used to. I found it very hard to wrap my head around. It is way beyond my comprehention." "Kinda suspect." (jealous boyfriend over a romantic write! -auth) "WoWeeee this is really exausting to read, you tire me out by your hyperness!" "Wow- this is one of the most unique story-poems I've ever read on here. And the flow was flawless, and loved the quick pace." "very sophisticated, non-cliche dirty pretty, and just beautifully poetic" "LOL if someone could actually pull that off now that would be quite impressive." (and I did -auth.) "OH MY ROTFLMAOOOOOOO....Gawwwwwd your silly." "this is hysterical" "Blitherin' Good fun!" "I cant say that I understand this but it is well written." "You write so eloquently, I do not doubt, not for a moment that someone, would love to publish these." "You have the knack of tossing out random looking, nonchalant words that are sneakily polished to perfection." "Ak! I love this! It's so pretty!" "Why you wanna make me cry and I have a headache." "you have been missed..." "I KNEW you would think of something sweetie!" "I absolutely love the metaphors." "That's the kind of random humour I love..." "Well...that was rude." (and later) "Lol This was great. I was laughing all the way through. So that is why you were all like that!" "Oh no! This is too funny! Haha...now my day is much better!" "oh this is so sadly written..." "Well, I came by again to see how this was doing...everything is great...do you have bowings in the strings or no?" "Interesting. The word choice in this was quite complex, and I liked that about it." "The story was rather shallow, no internal meaning to me..." "Sorry but I just can't get to like this..." "I am sure the finished product will be mind boggling." "This works for me in the spirit of experiment & avant-garde deconstruction..." "For some reason the music made me think "Rhapsody in Blue" gone wrong...REALLY wrong...!" "OMG, I am rolling on the floor here... whooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!" "OMG...I was too SHOCKED by the changes to my music that I couldn't read the poem..." "One would perhaps consider the intrinsic subject/object dichotomy between..." "I will tell you I don't get it..." "Different so different I am not sure about this at all." "I do not think it is bad poetry, I just wonder, is it poetry..." "I looked at the number of lines and thought...no friggin way I'm gonna read this all. Then I did." "but it was so irritating scrolling down...lol..but absolutely love the poem..." "This was quite a different message from what I expected..." "you tied my head in a knot...bravo" "Yes!!! How you cleaned up the end was absolutely beautiful!!!" "I suppose it means you are a Virgo?" "good grief wbiro lol" "I see you're up to your usual, unusual tricks, Poet." "Great write despite the typos." "It's a bit over the 30 lines I asked for (over 3 times that even)..." "I think Ellis will like it, that's all that matters." "I rather enjoy the words as they fall euphonously on the ear without the recording..." "the pictures are distracting and the whole is merely complicated by the glossary in the notes." "ag you are the best!!! Thank you for your comments!!!! English not my first Language, makes it hard to write sometimes..." "Not for me I am afraid on reflection." "Suddenly I feel like singing fado, and dancing the flamenco." "The pictures were so pretty! And the poetry of course too. ^_^" "You are the first person I've ever mentioned Vietnam to..." "I am sorry for spelling your name wrong. your name is like a set of broken teeth, not a train set."
“the little ways mean more to some than all the big things in life…”
“this is off on syllable count and the wrong syllables are stressed…”
“so eerie…”
“thank you for your wonderful and gentle message of kindness…”
“wow, that was quite hard for me to read…”
“obviously you missed the point…”
“a tad bulky, but still very readable…”
“just when I think no one can ramble as well as I, he appears on my doorstep…”
“I found the placement of all the yacks and and yackities and yicketies extremely pleasing visually…”
“a very whimsical write indeed…”
“Wow this is so unusual!”
“this was absolutely beautiful. didn’t know you had this in you lol”
“sweet, wistful, full of mystery… with so few words…”
“I can hear you say this…”
“haha! Sometimes you’re ridiculous.”
“It sound like you are addicted to a carousel lol”
“unlike anything I have ever come across…”
“your columns are filled with sage advice…”
“this is not really a poem, more of a statement…”
“do I dare even say that I am in the mood for sushi?”
“hummmmmmmm la la la….. I could sing this…”
“I got impatient waiting for the words to appear…”
“a little hard to follow but what flair and artistry…”
“this is really good I lik it…”
“I was wondering where you were going with all this…”
“liked the internal rhyme and intensity…”
“I don’t know how you fit so much of Frank’s (Zappa) insanity into one poem…”
“makes me think of a cross between Thomas Pynchon and dos passos…”
“a great blend of imagery and poetry…”
“to me, this felt like a blend of our two styles…”
“how do I critique this when I don’t know what it is?”
“I truly believe that you could trim this down a bit…”
“this is not a funny poem…”
“Very male. This sounds like a bachelor lol”
“the graphics and odd layout steal from the intensity of the poem…”
“bizarre and though-provoking…”
“Wow, awesome poem. So unlike what I’ve been reading from you…”
“Awesome poem, my favorites are: ‘I’m out of my mind, what’s your excuse?” “I believe in Pluto”
“when I read this I was glued to the screen…”
“I’d say this is written more like a thesis than a poem…”
“three cheers for imagination.”
“What an awesome Piratey poem!”
“I don’t even know what to think of this…”
“lovely penchant for words…”
“Science turned poetry, I would have never imagined it possible!”
“seems to speak of regret…”
“Oh boy, your dynamo was sure hummin’…”
‘Talk about a slice of Americana. You’ve given us a whole pieful!”
“OK, you are out there in that airy babble…”
“sorry, but not a fan of consistent meter…”
“overall, disappointed…”
“I like the triple Terzanelle chain better…”
“a true Trekkie poem…”
“a wild ride… serious, funny, and poignant…”
“you have touched the heart, and with the imagery you kept the mind busy…”
“this is certainly a different theme for a sonnet…”
“thank you for your entry in our contest, unfortunately it doesn’t fit in with the rhyme and flow…”
“the actual form of the poem is strange, I haven’t seen this at all before…”
“threads of genetic engineering and evolution isn’t really the angle I was hoping for…”
“a very weird blend of humor and seriousness…”
“the repetition go a little old and the rhythm could be smoother…”
“I do enjoy your stories of galaxies and beyond the stars…”
“It flows nicely and the punctuation and grammar are right on cue…”
“Ooh. This is indeed poetry. Very stirring and very professional, formal, lovely. Indeed you are a poet.”
“Very little rhyming, but still very nice…”
“This was truly beautiful. The combination of beautiful words and beautiful music results in… you guessed it: extreme beauty…”
“Sautéed prairie dog?
five comments that together closely sum me up: "Well, I have never seen nor read poetry this way." "Oh, my...I am stunned by the melancholy beauty of this." "A brilliant melange of astro-physics, robotics, hard-core SF and human emotions."
"I love spongebob!"
2004-2006:
“LMAO!”
"Ah Beloved One, you make me so excited!"
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How can I ever thank you for that?"
Ahhhh!”
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