I am only recently venturing into the realm of prose.
I'm not very good at it yet: detailed critiques appreciated!
Thanks!
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The last ten months were Hell.
During all that time, I must have thought it would end. Being the selfish mother that I apparently am I actually thought hi -
She felt the sorrow rising from the well of her tired, aching heart like the slow boil of a geyser before it bursts through the surface of the ground above it.
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aawwwww, angsty youth (in 55 words)12 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 9 2:01 PM 2005. In Childrens
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She felt the sorrow rising from the well of her tired, aching heart like the slow boil of a geyser before it bursts through the surface of the ground above it.
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The last ten months were Hell.
During all that time, I must have thought it would end. Being the selfish mother that I apparently am I actually thought hi -
aawwwww, angsty youth (in 55 words)12 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 9 2:01 PM 2005. In Childrens
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