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i guess it could be said that i am a "budding poet"; having dabbled in poetry here and there for many years, i have just started to really dive into the real art after a lyrical vacation. i'm still experimenting with different styles and such. i tend to write with four lines per stanza and rhymes. however, in the past, i have written in different forms. maybe i will post some of those here at a later date. in the mean time, feel free to leave comments on the poems which are posted, and leave constructive criticism on how to improve. of course, if you just like it "as-is" that's fine too.

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Last seen on Nov 29 4:07 PM. Member since April 4, 2006.
I'm a citrine experience poet for 156 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "hope in the Lord...renew your strength (Is. 40:31)".
I am a 19 year old girl (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
I am in the groups Poets Against Child Abuse
I have 156 comments, 80 poems

My Poetry

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Cry of My Heart

"Dear God," I cry
"I need You tonight

23 lines, January 18
Loving Pain

I thought this would be easy
That it wouldn't hurt this bad

38 lines, May 5, 2008
My Teddy Bear Hero

Curly brown hair sits upon the head
Of my strong, blue-eyed teddy bear

18 lines, 1 comment, March 19, 2008
All You've Done

Father up in Heaven Only You know my pain

28 lines, 1 comment, February 29, 2008

Guest Book

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Ted E Bare on April 21, 2006

You're very welcome for the comment and applause

Ted E
Fallen Hard on April 17, 2006

Your peoms are great... Becoming a poet on here! And happy that u joined...
♥ Fallen Hard!
DreamingSpirit on April 4, 2006

Yay!!! you joined, now I can stalk- I mean talk with you more! lol, jk!
DS