i've tread the turf of poetry too short a time
to fully comprenhend all that entails
a poem, story or a rhyme
that's better, worse, succeeds or fails;
all i can try to do is see
whether a poem touches me.
in terms of my own verse, i can but say
some think them fine, some wish them thrown away
my boyfriend thinks them too cliche
(-at times, that is; i love him anyway)
but aptitute at writing that that rhymes
comes easily to she who, many times
has wished she lived in other place-
in other time of glove and lace.
to fully comprenhend all that entails
a poem, story or a rhyme
that's better, worse, succeeds or fails;
all i can try to do is see
whether a poem touches me.
in terms of my own verse, i can but say
some think them fine, some wish them thrown away
my boyfriend thinks them too cliche
(-at times, that is; i love him anyway)
but aptitute at writing that that rhymes
comes easily to she who, many times
has wished she lived in other place-
in other time of glove and lace.
- Last seen on Dec 15 9:57 PM 2008. Member since August 17, 2005.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 128 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "amo ergo sum".
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/camillalaxmi
- I have 128 comments, 1 contest, 22 poems, 3 stories
My Poetry
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And I, too torn by love and lust,
Did but see, with dagger, all was just.24 lines, 4 comments, August 20, 2006. In Weird -
we barely even notice the
cherry blossoms.18 lines, 3 comments, August 17, 2006. In Hope -
Scene: A brightly furnished room. On one wall is a bookshelf with children’s toys. The sound of a baby screaming in the background.
My Stories
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711 lines, June 21, 2006. In 600-2000 words, Science fiction
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and brief coexistance delights every fornicating girl. he is jester-king, lady myself, not obviously predisposed queen. ruling? some treasure!
- ubiquitous voracity while xe32 lines, 4 comments, August 21, 2005. In <200 lines, Humor -
He approached my stall, wearing too many clothes for a hot summer’s day such as this. I arranged my saffron powder and chilies in a more appealing fashion, and tried very hard787 lines, August 19, 2005. In <200 lines, Fiction
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DarkBlaze128 : hello on July 31, 2007I added you to my favorites, you should check out some of my poems, I only started writeing poetry a few months ago, Pain is love was my first write, about my daughter..
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Two-headed Boy on April 7, 2006there is a new post on the ocd group site xXx
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abernaith on September 7, 2005Hello. Just stopping by, again. Here's a flower, it's got a ladybug in it. Maybe it will amuse you, if you think about it.
