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All my life, I have gone back and forth between living in Chicago, and living in Las Vegas, right now, it's Chicago. I go to school during the day, and after school I live the not so exiciting life of a sales rep. I wake up early, and don't go to sleep until late, I work all day during the week days and just when I am about to go crazy, the weekend comes, and I can relax, hang with friends, or whatever. I try to sneak in a few minutes of writing every day, and I write poetry, short stories, and occasional reflections of that day. The girls I like are a little bit darker, and mysterious, but also have a good sense of humor and know how to relax, and have fun. I am just an average guy, trying to get ahead in life, so unfortunately, I have to work a lot sometimes. My style of writing is just a reflection of how I am feeling at that moment. If I feel good, then the poem is lighter, but if I feel bad, then the poem is darker. Generally I like to read darker poems. I like writing, dancing, romancing, but I also like playing sports, and just hanging out.

I love comments on my poems, so anyone and everyone, please comment on my poetry.

Last seen on Nov 8 9:46 PM 2007. Member since June 14, 2005.
I'm a jade dragon poet for 266 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "Sweet Home Chicago!".
I am a 18 year old guy (U.S.)
When I'm not writing, I'm a Student during the day, sales rep. at night.
I have 266 comments, 1 contest, 26 poems

My Poetry

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Haunted Mind

Soon, the ghosts will take over, and I will be out of my mind
Just the haunting thoughts left in there, taking control, forcing their evil

36 lines, 2 comments, April 25, 2006. In Angst
A Web of Lies

I am not complaining, or saying I am a bad person
I just needed to write this stuff out, to tell somebody

46 lines, 5 comments, April 8, 2006. In Personal
random thoughts of us

with the annoying beep of the machine next to you, beneath the hum of the dim lights, shining off these stupid tiles
you lying there, and me sitting here

85 lines, 4 comments, December 31, 2005. In Hope, Angst
The Tables Have Turned

As I stood over you, after I beat you down
Please recover fast, please come after me, PLEASE give me an excuse

40 lines, 9 comments, August 7, 2005. In Dark, Angst

Guest Book

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Lady Voldemort on April 25, 2006

hey there,

you haven't been here for a lil while, so I thought I'd just pop over here and say Welcome Back.

I'll cya 'round sometime.

MORSMORDRE!
- The Dark Lady
Upkeep on April 20, 2006

That's it! "The sword". Saw it in a museum, somewhere.....and thank you. For viewing my work. And the constructive criticism.
Upkeep on April 19, 2006

French name, no? Define, if you will.
on September 18, 2005