Save Your Breath... Love is so Cliche
I LOVE To WRITE.
so with the blood colored ink i write, there is nothing new til this very day. i've done all i can, and there's //nothing// i can do to help it. i throw up the poison of the untruthful invention that has been shot up through my veigns, "in a form of i'll be perfectly okay tomorrow."
but as i go on, it is only okay to breathe in my dreams.
&& with this suffering, i spend all my time waiting for that second chance, but i can not bare the chance any longer.
with this hypocracy i can no longer bare, my porcelain face is so cold & empty, & there's bruises dripping from my smile...
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i live, love ehn breathe Music!
i liek a lot of underground bands... some mainstream... if they are good. you know what i mean? hmmm... i guess im just another person. i put my shirt on over my head, i put one leg in at a time when i put on my pants, i eat, i sleep i drink, i laugh i cry, i bleed, i talk, i whisper. im just that girl. my name says all.
my poems are more lyrical type. but eh its kool... i write what i feel.
i had an old all poetry. ((fallen from grace)) but i got tired of that one, so i made this one. i was introduced to allpoetry by my ex a while back ehn fell in love with the site, then for a while i lost inspiration, nothing seemed to have hit me. so i went on for a while about half a year without writting anything, i've tried, but nothing would just seem to come out, then one night i was feeling all these different feelings, ehn wrote them down ehn it came out as a poem. i thought great, now it's gunna take me a nother while to come up with something, next day i was sitting in my 5th period class ehn i was just writting pointless ''note self" things, ehn inspiration has struct me ehn it never seemed so alive.
i LOVE reading! i always have some book im reading. but lately i've picked up "The Masque of The Red Death" ehn fell in love with it. probably one of my top Edgar Allen Poe story.
ehn one poem i have read recently in a poetry book, is "heart, We Will Forget Him" by: emily dickenson.
Take back the roses, take back the letters, im sleeping alone and it holds me much better.
Turn back the pages, the poems to the dead, im dreaming too high up and falling instead.
Almost on top of the world and we'd fallen, we could have been saved with the effort you promised, followed you words from the letters you'd send, the last on my nightstand im leaving unread.
as it fades i can hear as the window breaks, these consequences never seemed so grave, here it comes im the one with the broken heart, my inspiration never seemed so alive.
Why walk away when you always turn back, she's hurt me before but im smarter than that, i've lost the key to that glow in your eyes, im all by myself and that's fine.
It's a call to the keepers of the light, the weak need not apply, glory fades when courage dies, here it comes im the one with the loaded gun, im not afraid to make this fun, shoulda known it when you saw it in my eyes.
(i can't take this back)
Now in the darkness, the candle we lit, Barely still burning and begging for wind, i'll prove that im stronger, now after i've died, and i'll put out the candle and force it aside.
BANDS i LOVE:
ALEXIC
my unsaid everything
Murder At The Cathedral
omissa
OUR LAST NIGHT
a life in vain
alesena
before tomorrow
getaways
drop dead gorgeous
Wit's End
My beautiful ending
CATHERINE
red horizon
domeshots
everything taken
Malicious Slaughter
poison the well
FINCH
marilyn manson
a7x
smile empty soul
murderdolls
staind
lacuna coil
archenemy
dimmiu borgior
slayer
3 doors down
shine down
3 days grace
bleeding through
death cab for cutie
Boysetsfire
thrice
Thursday
No Use For A Name
Lagwagon
Good Riddance
RX Bandits, Dredg
Between the Burried and me
A Change Of Pace
Yhe Used
the cranberries
the desden dolls
my ruin
otep
opeth
metallica
AFI
old man's child
DISTURBED
rob zombie
koRn
cold
pat benatar
garbage
hatebreed
chevelle
black dahlia murder
mushroom head
story of the year
the used
a perfect sircle
as i lay dieing
atreyu
children of bodom
rock is my favorite genre of music. but i listen to anything ehn everything... =)
I LOVE To WRITE.
so with the blood colored ink i write, there is nothing new til this very day. i've done all i can, and there's //nothing// i can do to help it. i throw up the poison of the untruthful invention that has been shot up through my veigns, "in a form of i'll be perfectly okay tomorrow."
but as i go on, it is only okay to breathe in my dreams.
&& with this suffering, i spend all my time waiting for that second chance, but i can not bare the chance any longer.
with this hypocracy i can no longer bare, my porcelain face is so cold & empty, & there's bruises dripping from my smile...
_________________________________________________________________________
i live, love ehn breathe Music!
i liek a lot of underground bands... some mainstream... if they are good. you know what i mean? hmmm... i guess im just another person. i put my shirt on over my head, i put one leg in at a time when i put on my pants, i eat, i sleep i drink, i laugh i cry, i bleed, i talk, i whisper. im just that girl. my name says all.
my poems are more lyrical type. but eh its kool... i write what i feel.
i had an old all poetry. ((fallen from grace)) but i got tired of that one, so i made this one. i was introduced to allpoetry by my ex a while back ehn fell in love with the site, then for a while i lost inspiration, nothing seemed to have hit me. so i went on for a while about half a year without writting anything, i've tried, but nothing would just seem to come out, then one night i was feeling all these different feelings, ehn wrote them down ehn it came out as a poem. i thought great, now it's gunna take me a nother while to come up with something, next day i was sitting in my 5th period class ehn i was just writting pointless ''note self" things, ehn inspiration has struct me ehn it never seemed so alive.
i LOVE reading! i always have some book im reading. but lately i've picked up "The Masque of The Red Death" ehn fell in love with it. probably one of my top Edgar Allen Poe story.
ehn one poem i have read recently in a poetry book, is "heart, We Will Forget Him" by: emily dickenson.
Take back the roses, take back the letters, im sleeping alone and it holds me much better.
Turn back the pages, the poems to the dead, im dreaming too high up and falling instead.
Almost on top of the world and we'd fallen, we could have been saved with the effort you promised, followed you words from the letters you'd send, the last on my nightstand im leaving unread.
as it fades i can hear as the window breaks, these consequences never seemed so grave, here it comes im the one with the broken heart, my inspiration never seemed so alive.
Why walk away when you always turn back, she's hurt me before but im smarter than that, i've lost the key to that glow in your eyes, im all by myself and that's fine.
It's a call to the keepers of the light, the weak need not apply, glory fades when courage dies, here it comes im the one with the loaded gun, im not afraid to make this fun, shoulda known it when you saw it in my eyes.
(i can't take this back)
Now in the darkness, the candle we lit, Barely still burning and begging for wind, i'll prove that im stronger, now after i've died, and i'll put out the candle and force it aside.
BANDS i LOVE:
ALEXIC
my unsaid everything
Murder At The Cathedral
omissa
OUR LAST NIGHT
a life in vain
alesena
before tomorrow
getaways
drop dead gorgeous
Wit's End
My beautiful ending
CATHERINE
red horizon
domeshots
everything taken
Malicious Slaughter
poison the well
FINCH
marilyn manson
a7x
smile empty soul
murderdolls
staind
lacuna coil
archenemy
dimmiu borgior
slayer
3 doors down
shine down
3 days grace
bleeding through
death cab for cutie
Boysetsfire
thrice
Thursday
No Use For A Name
Lagwagon
Good Riddance
RX Bandits, Dredg
Between the Burried and me
A Change Of Pace
Yhe Used
the cranberries
the desden dolls
my ruin
otep
opeth
metallica
AFI
old man's child
DISTURBED
rob zombie
koRn
cold
pat benatar
garbage
hatebreed
chevelle
black dahlia murder
mushroom head
story of the year
the used
a perfect sircle
as i lay dieing
atreyu
children of bodom
rock is my favorite genre of music. but i listen to anything ehn everything... =)
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- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 35 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Save Your Breath, Love Is So Cliche".
- I am a 17 year old girl from California (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a n actress, singer, dancer.
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- I have 35 comments, 84 poems
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exsistance is no longer in sight. fright and tears roam the night.20 lines, September 3, 2007
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holding hands in pain and pleasure
you stepped on the ground25 lines, 1 comment, February 19, 2007 -
feeling like a stranger in the presence of myself.
there's no where to run. hide behind the doors, Shhhh... they don't need to know.31 lines, February 4, 2007 -
as hes in the next room,
i see someone else close to you.41 lines, 3 comments, November 15, 2006. In Personal
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toke666 on March 19, 2007hey wassup how's life???
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toke666 on November 4, 2006oh, and that piece that you said isnt done yet
... its finished, nothing fancy at all like how i usualy like to do...
but its sufficient to express how i am buried deep inside of me, hee -
toke666 on November 4, 2006life is great like we talked about today, sum things are still buried deep within me... but i dont intend to ever let any of that out ever again

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ietachie on October 30, 2006I think that would be alsome if you make it into a song i so want to read it when you get it done are u putting it on all poetry
