I am a sixteen-year-old student from California who loves reading, writing, acting, and swimming. I love life. I know, it's cliche, but I do.
I like Burt's Bees, coffee, dirtbikes, pens, heavy paper, rain, umbrellas, and ice cream.
And I love people. I love getting into people's heads, meeting new people, and I have a certain crazy streak. Unfortunately, I'm also very shy. Which basically means I have issues.
Anyway, I like to write poetry but I hate what I write, so I'm doing this in order to hopefully get some constructive criticism and improve my writing--or just to figure out that I can't write poetry, and should maybe devote myself to jumping off bridges or writing tasteless, angsty deathmetal songs.
I like Burt's Bees, coffee, dirtbikes, pens, heavy paper, rain, umbrellas, and ice cream.
And I love people. I love getting into people's heads, meeting new people, and I have a certain crazy streak. Unfortunately, I'm also very shy. Which basically means I have issues.
Anyway, I like to write poetry but I hate what I write, so I'm doing this in order to hopefully get some constructive criticism and improve my writing--or just to figure out that I can't write poetry, and should maybe devote myself to jumping off bridges or writing tasteless, angsty deathmetal songs.
- Last seen on Jan 20 11:19 AM 2007. Member since October 1, 2006.
- I'm a topaz horse poet for 12 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "hope is a waking dream.".
- I am a girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a (not.).
- I have 12 comments, 9 poems
My Poetry
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Let us go then, you and I,
When the bees have just begun to fly -
In a land far away where people do play
Who exist only in rhymes... -
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A lizard scurrying under a bush, leaving only the tip of his yellow-patterned tail out
A hawk soaring in the sky, singing his melancholy song to the silent hil20 lines, October 1, 2006. In Nature
Guest Book
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just scribbles on October 1, 2006haha, you definitely have excellent taste. i absolutely love your poems; how do you add someone to your favorites?
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fall into me on October 1, 2006all right first of all: we are the same, haha. my favorite poem is the love song of j. alfred prufrock and my favorite author is c.s. lewis. lovely.
i read through some of your stuff and it's beautiful. i'll add you to my favorites and take the time to comment on some individual poems.
