X-Factor SERIOUS HELP NEEDED

K so we have to write prose
and I'm good at prose right?
Well I haven't a clue where I want this piece to go.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/6778321

What I have now is aslkdiuafhouwayr
so any input would be fantastic.


I REALLY REALLY REALLY need some feedback so that maybe i can get a better sense of direction.

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