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HI everyone i am in
a lost for words i am in
the time of my life and
having nothing to show for

sometimes i think that my writing
helps me find my way out of some of the
things thats going in my life.

Sometimes i want to show people that
it doesnt matter where you come from in
life all our problems is the same. no matter
where you come from.

but heres the problem me and my writing
i write the way i talk so its kind of hard for me
to write anything down the write way that
it should go.

so i am asking for your help in this matter
for any question or answer that you want
to leave me you know where to put it or you can
email me my email adderss is on my screen so contact
me with the problem that i have.

thank you for your time of
reading and thinking

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  • trekkergirl
    March 29
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    The best way to change your writing style isn't easy it is to read other writers that you respect... notice the way they write. Their form, language, punctuation useage. That kind of thing. Have a lot of people on line/off line read your work. Offer constructive critisim and don't take fault with them for doing so. Listen. Look and use what is useful. That is what I do. And it seems to be working well for me

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