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rewriting as sonnet

AS We look for tomorrow.
There is no time to borrow.
Life can be thrown and tossed
making up for things you lost.1

Even if I know life is hard.
there is no time to discard.
There is time for everything.
Do you hear the birds sing?
Animals can be struggling too.2

If they can live , you can live too.
when you are feeling so much pain
after you will have more to gain
so take each moment everyday
and do not throw your life away.3

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    2 days ago
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    EXCELLENTLY magnific...


    Outstanding in contents and presentation. A profound subject dealt to full exoteric picture of wise message. A sublime composition of superb aesthetic value.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

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