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Red Red Rose

You came to my life like a blooming red rose.There was no need for a rose when your presence itself filled my heart like a rose garden.Beautiful,everything around me became beautiful.Since that night,The night I met you.It was dark but the moon shone with such a delight.As you stepped near our place.I was nervous but more than that happy to see you in real finally.
It had been a long wait.After one long year of longing for you.I met you at last.I have never met you before face to face.But we have been talking on msn and phone,And I knew you quite well.I wondered whether I would recognize you.Just at your first word I was sure that its you.How could I ever mistake the way you speak and your voice.It was like a dream come true.I felt like flying high upon the clouds.You must be my prince I thought.
And then we sat on the couch and talked.It seemed like we had a lot to talk.I never felt like I met you for the first time.I was so attached to you emotionally.And time flew too fast that night.We had dinner together.It was like my first date.You smiled so tenderly that I felt like you were mine.And when you held my hand I felt so right.It was getting late so you left.I stood at the door and watched as you walked.
The next morning I met you again.It was beautiful.I felt so special.In your presence.Even though you were playing a game on lap that day.I was still sitting with you.Being with you was the best feeling ever.
But then you began to share your feelings.You told that you prefer talkative girls.And I was too childish.I felt so bad.You began to do many things more that I felt hurt.You chatted with other girls while I was just next to you.And said that you did not feel like anyone was there.It was disgusting.It was a sign that you did not like me.I wondered why you kept on meeting me while you said bad things about my personality.Was it a pass-time?.You even said that no one will like me because of the way I am.How do you know that,even if guys proposed me I denied because you were in my heart.
Things were a bit confusing at the time I met you last time.I liked you for who you were.Even you were not perfect.No one is.But I couldn't see any of your flaws since I was so in love with you.With all these confusions you left.It was the last day.I cried that night.Because I missed you so much.And wondered whether I could meet you again.And that night when I called you,you said that you love me,It was some kind of beginning.
After that we talked a lot on phone the distance did not matter.About 6 times a day.I was happy.Thought you really loved me.
But then I found out your message to a girl on face book.My soul screamed.Again that girl.The girl you talked about that day.That's enough.I was so hurt that I did not pick up your phone.Why on earth you did that to me???If you dint love me why you faked it? It was all a lie.My dreams are crashed.I lost it all.
My Red red rose.

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  • sonia 77
    August 10
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    lovely work ! i like you writing it's sound very 'LADY LIKE .." gud luck !!

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