I love both reading and writing, and have since a very young age. I am currently one year away from graduating with a four year honors BA in English literature, and planning on continuing on to graduate studies. 
If my comments ever seem harsh it is simply because I try to do my best (if I feel qualified in doing so) to give suggestions for poetic growth and improvement, and sometime forget to mention what I found enjoyable about your work.
I share a crappy two room bachelor in a crummy area of the downtown of my city with my wonderful fiance, Drew. Rent is cheap, and I can walk to school year round from here. I've lived away from home since I was 17, and as much as I wish I had my mom's cooking to keep me from mal-nourishment during final paper week, I have little patience for those university students whose mothers still wake them up in the morning.
If my comments ever seem harsh it is simply because I try to do my best (if I feel qualified in doing so) to give suggestions for poetic growth and improvement, and sometime forget to mention what I found enjoyable about your work. I share a crappy two room bachelor in a crummy area of the downtown of my city with my wonderful fiance, Drew. Rent is cheap, and I can walk to school year round from here. I've lived away from home since I was 17, and as much as I wish I had my mom's cooking to keep me from mal-nourishment during final paper week, I have little patience for those university students whose mothers still wake them up in the morning.
- Last seen on Sep 8 2:29 PM. Member since May 8, 2006.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 262 comments.
- I am a 20 year old person (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a full time university student at the University of Winnipeg. .
- I am in the groups PinUp Doll Disasters, WOMEN Support Group
- I have 262 comments, 7 contests, 41 poems
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One day someday soon I will remember you,
and frost will have had nothing to do with it.15 lines, 7 comments, October 14, 2008 -
pumpkin orange mittens
red wool cardigan13 lines, 2 comments, October 3, 2008 -
A melancholy, pastel striped curtain
is all that seperates me24 lines, 5 comments, October 2, 2008
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- Glass Menagerie at sharepoetry
Water splashes on the throttle of the throat, / Spittle leaks from / pointed corners of bleeding mouths, / Straight Jacket. / Let us wrap our arms around ourselves / and stand next to one another. / Gaping, drooping eyes will tell our - Purification at sharepoetry
The stem furls back into the body, / chews on the root, deep in the Earth. / Pulsing vivacious Earth / let me lay my head on your chest / let me smell your musty, morning dew / find your rhythm in my soul, / my Negesh, my Dan-Tien, / let me
