I love both reading and writing, and have since a very young age. I am currently one year away from graduating with a four year honors BA in English literature, and planning on continuing on to graduate studies. 
If my comments ever seem harsh it is simply because I try to do my best (if I feel qualified in doing so) to give suggestions for poetic growth and improvement, and sometime forget to mention what I found enjoyable about your work.
I share a crappy two room bachelor in a crummy area of the downtown of my city with my wonderful fiance, Drew. Rent is cheap, and I can walk to school year round from here. I've lived away from home since I was 17, and as much as I wish I had my mom's cooking to keep me from mal-nourishment during final paper week, I have little patience for those university students whose mothers still wake them up in the morning.
If my comments ever seem harsh it is simply because I try to do my best (if I feel qualified in doing so) to give suggestions for poetic growth and improvement, and sometime forget to mention what I found enjoyable about your work. I share a crappy two room bachelor in a crummy area of the downtown of my city with my wonderful fiance, Drew. Rent is cheap, and I can walk to school year round from here. I've lived away from home since I was 17, and as much as I wish I had my mom's cooking to keep me from mal-nourishment during final paper week, I have little patience for those university students whose mothers still wake them up in the morning.
- Last seen 4 hours ago. Member since May 8, 2006.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 260 comments.
- I am a 20 year old person (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a full time university student at the University of Winnipeg. .
- I am in the groups PinUp Doll Disasters, Proud to Be a Feminist, Real Critiques, The Undead Poets Society, WOMEN Support Group, homework help
- I have 260 comments, 7 contests
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*Points will hopefully go up daily. Keep an eye on them, I just need to be more active on the site. *Contest closed except to finalists of my "Complete Stress" contest. *This contest is based on editing: please wri300 points, ends October 13, 4 entries
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pumpkin orange mittens
red wool cardigan13 lines, 1 comment, October 3 -
A melancholy, pastel striped curtain
is all that seperates me24 lines, 3 comments, October 2 -
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crawling onto the pier I swall my28 lines, 7 comments, September 29
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- Glass Menagerie at sharepoetry
Water splashes on the throttle of the throat, / Spittle leaks from / pointed corners of bleeding mouths, / Straight Jacket. / Let us wrap our arms around ourselves / and stand next to one another. / Gaping, drooping eyes will tell our - Purification at sharepoetry
The stem furls back into the body, / chews on the root, deep in the Earth. / Pulsing vivacious Earth / let me lay my head on your chest / let me smell your musty, morning dew / find your rhythm in my soul, / my Negesh, my Dan-Tien, / let me
