Jedidaddy74

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your embrace

6 lines, April 26, 2007. In Adult, Dark, Humor
Not again

I just don't understand / one more failure / add it to the list / things for me never seem to work out / sitting in my chair, i look around / to the rotting food that surrounds

25 lines, 1 comment, April 24, 2007. In Personal, Sad
Poor Peter Pan

peanut butter by Peter Pan / manufactured in neverlan' / What happened, are you a crook? / You gave a job to Captain Hook? / Who's job it is to oversee / peanut butter quality?

8 lines, 4 comments, April 24, 2007. In Humor
my chain

with words and a paper
I bound you to me

11 lines, 2 comments, April 23, 2007

Harold goes to the park

421 lines, November 17, 2006. In , <600 words
descent into darkness

"OK Kids! come back up here." I wasn't totally sure they had been able to hear me. The wind rustling Through the leaves and the distant roar of the river muted my

493 lines, September 2, 2005. In <200 lines, Fantasy, Horror

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Synthetic-Nightmare : Hey on April 19, 2007

THanks for your comment on my poem! XD

And don't worry, it's definitely fictional, it's from a killers perspective
sarahblu on April 19, 2007

I'm so glad to see you spending time here. flowing words are hard for you i know. You've written alot of excellent pieces of late. Keep writing, expressing and growing.
Huntress on August 19, 2005

Cool name you have, Im from oregon also.
jedidaddy74 on August 19, 2005

Hey baby, I know you have some stories rolling around in your head. I'm hoping I can get you to put some into words. The people here are generally positive. Plus now you can comment on my work if you want well I love you and hope you enjoy this site

your forever wife
sarah