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Jackasssam• Show poetry

havent been writing long at all
i would love some comments
honest comments .... or some pointers would be nice as well!




music:

Nirvana,Sublime, Blind melon, Red hot chili peppers,  CKY, guns n' roses, Violent femmes, System of a down, Slipknot, staind, def leppard, Green day,bob marley, Godsmack, Spin doctors, jimmy Hendrix, The offspring, metallica, lynyrd skynyrd, HIM, Three days grace, Led zeppelin, ac/dc
ugh i guess that is all that i can think of for right now!


  • Last seen on Mar 2 9:58 PM. Member since July 3, 2005.
  • I'm a aventurine thought poet for 55 comments.
  • I am a 18 year old girl (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a school.
  • I have 55 comments, 15 poems, 2 stories

My Poetry

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  • empty
    i feel nothing
    deep inside.
    14 lines, October 8, 2005. In Dark
  • lost
    i feel like i need to cry
    I'm not really sure why.
    19 lines, 1 comment, October 8, 2005. In Dark
  • goodbye.
    I'm feeling blue,
    thinking of you.
    34 lines, 3 comments, August 31, 2005. In Dark
  • love!
    that feeling that you get,
    when he's around.
    11 lines, 2 comments, August 31, 2005. In Love

My Stories

  • ow pooh!
    my friend and i were walking down the road one day
    (not one of those roads with houses all over the place . on of those roads that are surrounded my woods)
    1285 lines, July 5, 2005. In <200 lines, Horror
  • ow shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    my friend and i were walking down the road one day
    (not one of those roads with houses all over the place . on of those roads that are surrounded my woods)
    1285 lines, 3 comments, July 4, 2005. In <200 lines, Horror

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