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Arising

Missing image


 

a bright star
bridges oceans of tears
miracles confirm

rising out of darkness
compassion shines



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Kwan Yin: www.crystalink s.com/kwanyin. html
Written January 6th, 2005

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  • MargaretG
    January 6, 2005
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    Excellent

    This complex metaphor conveys to me the idea of one whose works of mercy brighten the world. There is a striking mirror image in these lines, turning on "miracles". This leads me to think that the subject is not merely a saint. I love it.

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