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The Witches of Hope

I met them
when I was still in braces and band-aids
and an A-cup bra,
bitten nails, awkward smile,
I was halfway through childhood’s door,
but they said I had something special,
and would I sit with them for a spell?

Seven women on a porch
surrounded my mama on a summer night;
the air was heavy as cobbler
with smoke and Shalimar -
they had come to save mama
from going off the deep end, her strange friends,
the women I would come to call
the Witches of Hope.

“Don’t make the mistake
of ever thinkin’ you have just one mind”

They collected pieces of mama-
took her tears and transformed them into laughter,
engaged her demons in conversation
then put them quietly to bed
with soothing songs and sweet apricot brandy.

I watched as they danced
across the old wooden porch, outshining the moon
with their brilliant womanhood,
and my heart was full, as full as a starry sky,
to witness a power I had never known -
some may not believe in magic,
some only see things in black and white,
but on that summer night
I saw my mama begin to believe

and I began
to hope...




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I've been wanting to write about these women for a long time. You may be reading more about them if the words come...

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  • Topnotchsy
    June 28

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    Reading this poem and the Author Notes I have to wonder how (and why) you avoided sharing this part of you with us as you've shared so many others.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    June 28

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    Harvey,

    ~~then put them quietly to bed
    with soothing songs and sweet apricot brandy.~
    When I was young it was peach brandy, but the same moon.
    Love this look into the women on the front porch.
    Love,
    Joe


  • thepoetssoul
    June 28

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    The colour orange shines within this piece, I was surprised the moon was'nt aglow in tangerine; wonderfully written in vivid imagery. I for one am very interested in getting a better view on these ladies.Belief is strong and can work miracles, even if it's magic you believe in.
    Thank you for sharing, be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


  • sheltered
    June 27

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    "braces and band-aids"... fantastic

    "and would I sit with them for spell"
    nice- foreshadowing and pun at once

    “Don’t make the mistake
    of ever thinkin’ you have just one mind” who's quote is that and

    damn it if that aint true

    the ending left me feeling helpless
    yet it spoke of hope

    I always love the emotion
    and personality/charater
    you include

    you always make me feel so...


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 27

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    Laney,

    Indeed they knew instantly that
    you had something most “special”,

    Even at a young age- and you still do;
    Actually you have two special things,
    Which are ;

    Undeniable charm and

    Your own mystical magic,

    Of soul & heart.



    Len

    And yes, do write some more on them!

  • i read this, and then the author's notes and thought. wow... and it's taken this long to write about this incredible group of women??? i look forward to reading more... the words will come.


  • csmmoms2
    June 27

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    It's porches and funny things from the deep past. There to collect pieces of mamma and bring her around whole. -c


  • Peteskid gold member
    June 27

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    faith comes by seeing, i have learned not to deny things that i feel, things that i see... i think that is the special power, the blessing : being able to see. Looking forward to more of this...PK

  • I hope to read more about these women.  This is so intriguing. We need something to believe in, at times, it is what saves us. Wonderful poem, thank you for sharing.
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 27

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    My Lady Lane,

    You know the words always come... we just don't always have them at our command, but they will come... I know you have the faith, just read of it here.
    Love, buddy

  • Reading your poetry gives me hope like the woman in that poem did. It reminds me that there is still beauty in this world. Even if we can't always see it.


  • lunarlunacy
    June 27

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    A most interesting write that reads very real.

    I hope you there is more to come on this as per notes.

    A

  • This is the most amazing poem honoring the gift of magic and the wonder of wise women! Let me just say I am in awe of this poem...and I am so thankful you and your mama met the Witches of hope.

    Amazing...I do so hope to read more like this...thank you for sharing this and blessing my night more than I can ever say.



    Blessed Be~
    Az


  • notorious
    June 27

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    "I was half-way through childhood’s door,
    but they said I had something special,
    and would I sit with them for spell?"
    'halfway' is a word w/o the hyphen. But "childhood's door"...I really love that possessive form and as for having something special...well, duh!

    When people tell me that, I believe them, and I think you must've, too. Or wanted to, at least. (I sound presumptuous...)

    There's something...almost wistful in that first stanza for me.

    "the air was heavy as cobbler
    with smoke and Shalimar -"
    LOVE THAT.

    The one piece of dialogue you do have italicized is endlessly good.

    "outshining the moon"
    Yush.

    ;
    Jessica.

  • you should write a book about your life... it's a really good story...i'd buy it as i'm sure many others here would

  • This was wonderful. A circle of concerned friends is sometimes the best medicine.

    “Don’t make the mistake
    of ever thinkin’ you have just one mind” - This statement holds a lot of meaning for me personally. The only way I have been able to pass for even relatively sane was accepting that as fact, without it making a hundred percent sense to me.

    This write also has me thinking about my own mom..

    Well writ.

    Pass the pringles please.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 27

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    *smiles...I do so love your recollections of this part of your life, it's strong rich and vibrant as if it happened yesterday and that's what I love about your poetry. You take me there C

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