Today becoming as dark as yesterday
Like a never ending path I must follow
Darkness all around me tearing me apart
Depression an ice cold feeling
filling the space left behind
An intense feeling of nothingness and pain
All I can do is fall down
Down
Down
Into a bleak never ending abyss for comfort
Forcing me to lose control,
of everything i once knew and loved
It takes from me everything
And in return i'm left hollow
A fraction of my former self
Cold and alone
waiting for a release from this confinement
Waiting for Death to take me from this place
Cause for me it's become to late
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what an awsome poem.i loved it!!!
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UBER AMAZING!!!!
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lol thank u
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BOO!
this is very very gooddddddd!
im liking this one alot.....i still like another of ures better but i like this one!!!
XxX
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lol ty
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this is a very intense piece. i could literally feel the words bleeding forth their meaning as i read. god, poetry really frees u up doesn't it?
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yea i use it as a release. ty for commenting
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uber-duber gOOd child. ha. its reallly reallly nice. i can feel ur agony[[but idk if that is bc i hve it as well]] but yeah...NEATO WORRRKK.
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thxs. i hope u don't feel like this for long
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nice
really liked the way you wrote this you put a lot of thought and emotion into this pieces very well done I liked your line "Depression an ice cold feeling filling the space left behind An intense feeling of nothingness and pain All I can do is fall down". This really made me think i feel empty inside and cold and can;t do anythng about it. great write. keep up the work.
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ty glad u liked it
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i like the new pi
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thxs
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hey dude its me, tonya. what u talking bout. are these true feelings your going through?
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yes kind of i feel like this a lot
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grat poem honey. loved it I loved this part
Forcing me to lose control,
of everything i once knew and loved
It takes from me everything
And in return i'm left hollow
A fraction of my former self
Cold and alone
waiting for a release from this confinement
Waiting for Death to take me from this place
Cause for me it's become to late
so yeah anyway great job best poem yet
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ty ur comment means a lot 2 me
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brilliant
thought u said it was crap....well as far as i can see its awesome & totally wicked lol keep writing
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lol thxs
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thoughful, Incisive
i like it a lot i can feel the deeps of the downing... almost as if you were drowing in the conformity..struggling to escape from thier eyes...
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thxs for reading. glad u liked it
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i like it.
hey wuz up meany head. lol so i really like this one keep writing.
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thxs. meani head wat i do now? lol
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wow this is really good
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ty
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You did an amazing job with this. I completely realate. Very good work, and keep writing.
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thxs
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ohh, i rilly love this! I've always loved dark poetry and you did a rilly goof job here. I can relate to this =/
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ty for ur comment
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