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A Dog's Life

 

puppylarge.gif puppy large picture by SunshineUK

Sixteen years, now almost seventeen,
I've played at stick and ball, stayed seldom still
until good master's call would whistle shrill
to lead me back - no need to smack.  Sight keen.

Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
as boon companion, running round fun years.
His mother passed away, I shared the tears
that fountained forth and never seemed to end.

Sixteen years round each revolving moon
from hearth and home I pick up slightest sound,
ears prick, eyes bright, in sight I'm always found
to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.

Sixteen years, come rain or shine, we walk
twice, sometimes thrice a day, I sense each smell
around the house, know friends and rascals well,
and after dinner hear the table talk.

Sixteen years from pet to family,
from playful pat to priceless kith and kin,
I vet as threat who'd twins' affections win,
can smell a rat or chase cat up a tree.

Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
suffered unruly hands that now caress,
I guard them still, still at the same address,
as I will willing till my turn to go.

Sixteen years saw summers shedding hair,
saw autumns' colours charm birds from the trees,
saw winter whiteness whose bare branches' frieze
prepared for springs unbounded, weather fair.

Sixteen years, milk - nap - home-made pap brew,
from toothless start, heart full, until depart,
toothless, heart filled beyond all man may chart,
life's cycle spins till ready to renew.

Sixteen years that gambolled life away,
with water, beef and bone, I’ve played at will.
Scents seem less sharp today, and soon I will
make my last bow - still in thrill dreams I play !



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Animated Labrador Puppy - thanks to Sue Morten


Labrador Old  
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Definition gambol : play boisterously, light-hearted recreational activity for diversion or amusement
Definition vet : wordplay implying 'case the joint' or oversee more than in the sense of animal doctor
Definition frieze : horizontal band of sculpted or painted decoration
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In terms of life expectancy 1 'dog year' around between 6 and 7 human years. 16 is thus  approximately between 100 and 110. The world record for a cat's life is 38.

 


Stanza 3 : John Dryden Absalom and Achitophel, pt. 1, l. 545-50 (1681) Zimri,
But in the course of one revolving moon
Was chemist, fiddler, statesman and buffoon...
______


The initial poem wrote itself, drawn through and by a 16 year old labrador that joined four people in a small car for a long trip from Paris to St. Tropez New Year 1991/1992 ... 'and thereon hangs a tail's tale'

 

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  • Rovingone gold member
    January 30

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    My little babe is sixteen now too and she has always been a blessing. Unfortunately, my lab left me after thirteen years, but I certainly can relate to all the goodness you portray in your story.

  • This is truly one of the cutest most adorable pieces I have ever read I love it


  • loveangerbeauty
    January 30
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    sweet

    its obvious that you really love this dog
    and i love this poem!

  • This was a really loving poem that I enjoyed greatly. My family and I had to put our dog to sleep this past summer and these words brought back many of those fond memories that brought tears to my eyes. Great Job.


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 21

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    well done. the puppy picture is adorable. your poem emits beauty and the language used is awesome. dogs know how to take care of people and furry friends. well-deserving trophies. thanks for sharing.

  • theromantic
    January 18

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    love it

    animals are very great hearts walking this planet, as i speak ive got my baby pitbull pup here with me...u wrote so very well love the poem, keep it up...this part stood out great Sixteen years, milk - nap - home-made pap brew,
    from toothless start, heart full, until depart,
    toothless, heart filled beyond all man may chart,
    life's cycle spins till ready to renew.keep it up


  • Silent Wayfarer
    January 18

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    Honestly? I'm not one to say this word... but this was adorable! haha! I loved it. I'm not really a dog person, but I'm not one to pass up a cute puppy without petting it! I have always wondered what could possibly go through the mind of a dog. Strange, I know, but I AM strange. Hence, my use of the word "adorable" to describe such a great piece. Great thoughts and flow! ... And I loved the pics as well, btw! GREAT JOB!


  • JorgeST
    January 18
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    Amazing

    This is a great poem i use to have a dog as well i got it since i was three years old and he lived for 8 years this poem spoke to me a lot because just the way you wrote it i felt my dog was doing the same thanks you made me remember those good all days

  • JorgeST
    January 18

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    Amazing

    This is a great poem i use to have a dog as well i got it since i was three years old and he lived for 8 years this poem spoke to me a lot because just the way you wrote it i felt my dog was doing the same thanks you made me remember those good all days


  • dope
    January 18

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    I'm usually not a fan of rhyming are very structured poetry at all because most of the time it's forced in to the structure, but you pull it off quite well, flows nicely excepts for a few weird things here and there... but that's just me, I'm picky... really liked the last verse though, and I've seen that first picture somewhere, national geography website? Great photo... I also think you should've left out the other two pictures and the cutesy dog things between the verses, kinda takes away from the poem... for me anyways... either way, good read. thanks.


  • libithina
    January 18

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    Wonderful

    as a dog owner of four dogs and always had a dog this poem of your spoke to me ..
    sixteen years such a grand age
    a true part of the family of that there is not doubt
    I had a labrador that lived to that age
    slower its true but she used to let my eldest daughter ride on her back
    never forgetten her and never will
    when I see the snow I remember her
    rolling in it and each patch of water she could not resist to jump in I still laugh hoiw she used toi saturate us all ..
    Thankyou for sharing some of your wonderful companion with us .. a real treasure of the heart
    and of course as usual a jewel of a poem
    Wonderful x x
    s Lib xx Booknmarked **


  • BeThouMyVision
    January 17

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    It really hard letting go after so long. It's a treat and an honor though to have a pets love and devotion its not easy I wouldn't think. I have mine he's only a year now and I'm looking toward him being around a long time. I take extra good care of him and I feed him right! I basically freak out if he gets any cuts or scratches. He's my shadow really. And I wouldn't let anyone hurt him. Ive had him since he was a puppy at 2 weeks.

    This was an amazing write it makes you appreciate what one has in there life. Or even should make it more apart of. I even take care of my fish with love =] I couldn't be mean or hurt something not even a FISH! Heh and my beta's almost one.

    Great Poem I love it.


  • WhiteAngelCake
    January 17

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    That's a cool poem. I like the way you put the pictures. Dogs are awesome.

  • Out Out
    January 17
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    I feel if a dog were to write poetry this would be it.


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 17

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    Ok, i have seen this featured so many times and never clicked. I didnt click before because my friend said when she clicked and didnt comment you you put her on ignore. Which detered me from even wanting to read the poetry. However, curiosity being a friend of mine i wanted to know what you thought was good enough about this poem to feature it for so many times. It's not the kind of poetry i enjoy or generally read but it was written well it doesnt need to be something i like for me to know that. also im a cat person and dont like dogs >: although i will admit the second picture used is adorable. So despite the ramblings in this comment, it was a well written poem, and thats about all i can comment. Curiosity quelled and comment completed. Well penned.
    Laura


  • couldbeworse
    January 17

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    16 years is a good long life for a pup. my oldest was 14. I really liked this write.
    fav:

    Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
    as boon companion, running round fun years.
    His mother passed away, I shared the tears
    that fountained forth and never seemed to end.

  • Going Forever
    January 17

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    Hey there,.... I really did like this poem!! but it was so hard to choose, you know... I dont really like it when I have to choose in a contest, but its life - i guess

    Rose Fairy


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    January 17
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    Nice touch!

  • this was beautiful.

    i love dogs.my oldest one lived 13 years. so this poem really touched me in a special way.they seem to after the first months no longer be so much dogs as family. you've shown that in this poem.thank you for sharing the love we feel for them in this poem.


  • Nymphetemine
    January 16

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    I really loved this poem. What a wonderful freind you have in your dog. Wonderful write.
    ValkyrieNightWeaver


  • june0
    January 16

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    Lovely poem, {I love animals}. This poem warms my heart. It has some great lines in it like:
    Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
    suffered unruly hands that now caress,
    also: from pet to family
    I love the transformation over time.
    I also enjoyed the "play on words" like: vet & gambol
    Over all this is a heart touching poem with character & good form.


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    January 16

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    I love this poem! My mother's dog is like this friend and family member. He might be mom's dog but I am the one that he comes to for love and affection. I love that dog almost as much as I love my own kids. Thank you for this loving tribute! Now I want to go and hug my (mom's) dog!


  • SilverSea
    January 15

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    Aw, I love this poem. It totally deserved the trophies it got. When it started talking about the dog "departing," my eyes actually filled up. . . I couldn't imagine losing my dogs! Fantastic piece.


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 12

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    Being the owner of a faithful and loving nine year old miniature dachsund, I can certainly empathize with this poem. I love it. Bravo! Shancy.


  • A x e l
    January 12

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    I loved this poem. It reminds me of my dog that passed away shortly after my birthday.

    Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.


  • Valesha
    January 12

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    OMG!!!SO CUTE!!!

    this is so adorable and so cute. the puppy is beautiful. the whole time reading this i am like "awww"lol. this is absolutely wonderful, it made the highlight of my day.:-)


  • penchanted
    January 12

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    Priceless!

    "Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
    suffered unruly hands that now caress,
    I guard them still, still at the same address"
    Though I love all of it. As a novice I don't know all the language to describe your poetry, except that it moved me.... fifteen years my border collie/blue healer mix female named Little Bit, watched over my brood and even to the point of hearding them into the house when I called them to come to supper! I had to put her down last year, she had multiple tumors all over her body, but no pain. When her eye sight failed her, I knew I had to let her go. Ohhh I miss her so!! Thank you for a beautiful write, an ode to one of Gods most loyal companions.


  • JeremyWilliams
    January 11
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    AWSOME

    thats all there is to say


  • elinawilfred
    January 11

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    a great poem. fantastic.Sixteen years saw summers shedding hair,
    saw autumns' colours charm birds from the trees,
    saw winter whiteness whose bare branches' frieze
    prepared for springs unbounded, weather fair.
    A well written poem

  • pruedence
    January 11

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    My dog of 17 yrs, Daisy, had to be put down right before Christmas last year. She was always on the back of each one of my footsteps for everyone of those years. I still get up early thinking I am going to be letting her out...funny how we get so use to things...she is well missed...your words brought her back to me for a little while, thanks for sharing , well done,


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    January 9

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    2 Great BIG thumbs up!

    What can I say? I put my beautiful Yellow Lab, P.J. down many years ago at the ripe old age of 15.. Needless to say, your poem touched me to the core.. I could have written it myself and wish I had done so.. lol.. Thank you.. Since I'm STILL crying, I'm not sure what for, but thank you anyway!

  • Whew, so I am the 965th comment here lol! I have seen this featured many, many times - and decided I would have a read.

    This is a very well penned piece, with a great flow throughout. The imagery is well articulated, and certainly sophisticated in its composure.

    Nicely done!

  • This is an interesting write. I've never ready anything about a dog that still carried an interesting flow and story within it. Bravo.


  • star girl
    January 9

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    I thought it was cute.
    And whats great about it is that people barely ever write these kind of poems which make it more interesting! It was creative of you.
    I liked it a lot though.. Keep writing these imaginative poems.


  • sunflower.
    January 9
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    reminds me of 'Marley and Me', thus it is very sad.


  • DgM3
    January 9
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    sweet i loved it

    it was cute

  • a.t
    January 9
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    nice and beautiful


  • violinbunny
    January 9
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    This is awesome XDD I mean, you placed it really well on a pretty seldom topic XD Great great job!!


  • ajocean silver member
    January 9
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    very nice


  • Luciferschild
    January 8

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    reminds me alot of the various dogs ive had in my life, allot of the current dog too, alot of affection and positive emotion in this peice, alot of emotions that seem universal are invoked by it as well, everyone can relate to it, good job


  • LoveBug13
    January 8

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    cute

    I hope my dog stays with me that long. shes 5 now. She a georgus husky and shes as sweet as they come. this poem is so adorable I hope your dog stays with you for a very long time more. ^_^ good job


  • Keaira
    January 4
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    I think this is great.

    It's sweet and heartwarming, even for me, and I'm a cat person! XD


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 31, 2008
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    This is a cute piece. I think anyone that has had pets can relate to this. They are part of the family and indeed friends. Nice job.


  • Kathraina silver member
    December 31, 2008
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    Aww

    This is so cute! Great job! And congrats


  • Kari gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    This is a cute story on a dogs life. Congrats on your shines. I can see why you won them!


  • ShannonMan1
    December 31, 2008
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    I am sorry

    I hope my dog doesn't die. I am 5 and he is 3.


  • Mister Kite
    December 31, 2008
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    Blinding poem

    Really hits the spot.

  • jakec421
    December 30, 2008

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    Love it

    I love it cause i have had many dogs and they all would protect me with their lives, and i feel the same back at them, i believe that every familiy show have a chance to live and grow with a faithful dog.......... but thoses little Chiwawas i hate thoses things

    but anyways that you for sharing it


  • geckogirl silver member
    December 30, 2008

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    Fantastic, a mans best friend is his dog.. For some reason these four legged animals manage to love us no matter what... well done in your Gold & Silver very deserving


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    December 29, 2008

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    This is just wonderful. As a dog lover who shares her life with one, ten year old rottie and one 8 year old rottie, and a 125 pound great dane and..(lol ) a gremmie.. my heart understands the unconditional love of our companions as well as our love for them. Awesome writing that touched my heart. debby


  • vampiricarrot
    December 29, 2008

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    this is a lovely piec, it's really emotive and powerful, a brilliant write, well done.

    Jess xXx


  • Amanda K. Martin
    December 29, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading this poem. As an animal lover, this touched my heart. My family had this little teacup dachshund, who lived to be 14 years old, she passed away in November... it was like loosing a sibling, and this poem really made me feel warm and fuzzy. Good job, as well as an awesome write!!

  • angeldreams
    December 29, 2008
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    it touched me deep in heart.
    don't know why?
    i don't like pets much but i hate this human nature of being selfish and indifferent equally!
    great write.
    take care.


  • vanessa lez
    December 24, 2008
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    aww this is so beautifully written. so sweet! :]. very nice job.


  • The Molt
    December 23, 2008

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    inspiring

    it's so beautiful the way you spoke feelings for the animal. From beginning to end, this fellow had a good life.


  • yaotecatl
    December 23, 2008

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    Outstanding!

    I have two dogs (border collie and a shelty) and i saw them in every line though they are only 4 and three. I wouldn't change anything. You crafted this with such love and such detail that any dog would love this day as did I. :-) Thanks for sharing.:-) Well done!!!


  • BrokenSanity
    December 23, 2008
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    awww, love the piccys. beautifully written poet. Good luck for the comp.


  • Jeanette Violette
    December 23, 2008
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    what a great poem...goosebumps...that's rare
    dogs are gifts


  • xdavidxgrovesx
    December 23, 2008

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    This was a very, very good one! I thouroughly enjoyed this! I am not much of a dog person, but I think this changed my views. This really lets people see things from a dogs point of view and I really appreciate it! Thanks! =-]
    David

  • Aries gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    Wonderful Aries

    As a dog owner(over the years several dogs)one I had
    for 17years,a Belgian Shepherd,this is just so
    delightful to read,these are the 'lucky' dogs that are
    loved treated well & wanted.I have a almost 10 year old
    German Shepherd at the moment love the poem


  • nobodys-girl
    December 22, 2008

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    this is so adorable and sweet! i have three of the greatest dogs ever and this reminded me of them thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!

  • JuiceofOhio
    December 21, 2008
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    Sweet

    Awww that was sweet. Thanks for posting it I liked it a lot.


  • Risingmoon
    December 21, 2008

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    aww!

    I love dogs, i love your poem! When i first started reading it i thought it was going to have a sad ending, but it didnt, which was nice. But i think a sad ending would of given it a stronger impact. none the less a charming idea


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    Nice...and well deserved trophies!!

    PS> Take a look at AnnD's "A Cats Life"

  • strangefruit
    December 21, 2008
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    Great work, your affection comes through


  • Crazy-Love
    December 21, 2008

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    This was a cute poem! I really really liked it! The idea to write about one's pet is a good one. I used to have a dog a long time ago, I miss her.

    Crazy-Love[♥]

  • Xx-Erin-xX
    December 20, 2008

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    Great write! I loved it. I have two dogs (a Border Collie Mix - 5 years old and an American Cocker Spaniel - 3 years old). Some of the same things you wrote about are true for my dogs as well. I love the pictures you have in with the piece as well.

    Keep writting.


  • lisapoet
    December 20, 2008
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    Jest great! so well done! What a treat! Thanks!


  • CandiKisses
    December 20, 2008

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    Wow!

    What a beautiful write! I have always been very attached to my pets. I had a cat who lived to be 16. I love this!

  • katiebug1
    December 20, 2008
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    cute poem..... I think my puppy even enjoyed it lol good poe


  • jessicalong10
    December 20, 2008
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    i love it. i have a dog of my own so from this dog lover/owner nice job.


  • AsIThink gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    What a piece; the puppy-to-dog transformation was great. 16 years, huh? That's a whole lot of living (as you've nicely laid it out for us all). Very engaging write...With the number of comments you've already received here, I doubt I've said anything new. Except maybe this: dawg-gone wonderful...(smiling).

    AsIThink...

  • snugglz
    December 19, 2008

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    wow

    what a great tribute to what seems a very desrving subject.i've always kind of felt sorry for dogs,what being given us humans as your best friend.
    great stuff here thanx for sharing


  • Janice M Pickett
    December 19, 2008

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    This was totally delightful. I read it thinking the ending would be sad, that the beautiful dog had passed on. LOL I was a relief to find that was not the case. very nicely contsructed I like the breaks and teh style you used in this.Absolutely the Gold it received.

  • Sophie 1
    December 19, 2008

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    This is a good and short poem that captures one's attention. I also like your use of punctuation.... When used properly, it allows a poem to quiet easily flow.


  • debilynn gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    a wonderful write! i really like this. it captures the reader and carries them through. vivid imagery minus the pics. great rhythm and rhyme. thank you for sharing your amazing talent. keep writing poet! God bless you always


  • doglover
    December 18, 2008

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    lovely

    so cute. i love dogs i would have never thought about writing from a dog's point of view. its sweet and just plain creative and adorabbbblllleee


  • FlameHeart88
    December 18, 2008
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    Very good! Unique... good poem about a dog's life. It wasn't annoying or unclear like some others.


  • Olinda
    December 18, 2008

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    Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
    as boon companion, running round fun years.
    His mother passed away, I shared the tears
    that fountained forth and never seemed to end.

    This is a beautiful poem! I love its simplicity, and the way it was written, really like a dog reflectig back on his doggy faithful years.

    The pictures are adorable too, and you clearly love dogs. I adore this peice; great job!

  • nora
    December 18, 2008

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    Top Dog!

    You obviously love your dog, and I love your poem. A real tribute to a creature who is truly man's best friend. Parts of it brought tears to my eyes. Gorgeous pics too, thanks for sharing.


  • GrimRiff
    December 18, 2008

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    This is a nice way of looking at the world from a dog's view. I wonder if my dog will like it if I read it to him?
    A cheery poem, fun to read.


  • rinzurajan
    December 17, 2008

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    THAT WAS SO SWEET...I HOPE U READ IT OUT TO HIM AND HE WOULD HAVE APPRECIATED IT...!!!



    CHEERS


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    I had to look back to October, but I just knew I had read this before! I still think it is great, very touching, and very well-crafted.


  • IronMaiden1236
    December 17, 2008

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    Rare and Fine

    The most profound poem I have ever read was about a dog....You have been well met and well loved to win the love of a dog. ~bows~


  • HugsForEveryone
    December 17, 2008

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    Your work is brilliant. I can't believe how many times I have gone over and over and over your poems and they still seem to be flawless and leave me in awe. You truly are outstanding and inspiring. Thank you for sharing this piece with me, I love your work so very much
    ~


  • jimek
    December 17, 2008

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    I love my dog to

    My lab is 12 so I know exactly where your coming from.My prayer when he goes will be thank you God for letting him share his life with me and watch over him till I get there


  • White Tiger 96
    December 17, 2008

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    Wow! I don't know what to say. This is a breath taking poem, very beautiful, but a little sad. I love how you described the dogs life, very sweet. The pictures are adorible, espeically the puppy. I can tell you worked very hard on this piece and it shows you have allot of talent. I really enjoyed reading this, you truly are very talented!! Amazing Job!!! Keep Writing, I look forward to reading more from you!!!!


  • GradCupcake1-16-09
    December 17, 2008
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    good

    holy cow that is alot about a dogs life but i never really thought of it that way!!!


  • Meroza
    December 15, 2008
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    I am sorry, but I will have to DQ this poem, you see I am not allowing anyone else to enter contests at all and pre-writes was only up and running because some had problems adding seweral poems in the beginning, so please do not be offended, but it would be utter unfair if I let you join in when no one else can.


  • Cry Wolf
    December 10, 2008

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    Oh my gosh, that was so cute and lovely!!!

    Reminds me so much of that movie "My Dog Skip" since it is both touching as well as sad. Animal poetry is hard to do, but you pulled off all the emotions so well! Sometimes animals can be better than people dang...I feel like cuddling a puppy now lol. Terrific job.

    ~ Ink


  • LovinCharmer gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Very Well Penned

    To me this was a funny/sad piece. It held my interest. I had to put my own best friend down this past spring, and I still find myself reflecting on the good times, bad times, and hard times we had together. This piece captured my heart and once again made me reflect on my pal" Bandit" I mmiss him..Thanks for sharing and good luck in your contest...Lc


  • Andiness
    December 10, 2008

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    This was kind of sad, and I can tell that it was meant to be sad like that, but something about it, maybe it was the rhyimg (Not complaining, mind you, I love rhymes) made it seem slightly cheerful. I do the same thing in some of my poems so don't think I'm callling you crayz or anything. I t was very good.

    If that made any sense (I'm tired) then I'm glad it did, if not, I'm sorry

    -Pet-


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!


  • Cant force beloved
    December 10, 2008

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    I don't often enjoy to read poems that other people write about animals but I do like this one very much.
    Happy reading, Jonathan.


  • Mariana gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    What a wonderful story about a beloved dog. I adore animals so much. I like that you have written this from the dog's POV. Bravo!

    Mariana


  • catz Moderators member
    December 9, 2008

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    A nice tribute to this special dog, Jonathan It reminds me of my own black lab who passed away many years ago and my cat who passed at the age of sixteen years. Our pets are special for each of us... but I wonder if any of them realize what a cool life they have... all that pampering and appreciation from us.

    Good luck in this contest... Looks like another trophy coming up

    Dee


  • EiramDK
    December 9, 2008
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    Wonderful!

    This is such a cute poem!!!The flow was really good. I love the pics.

  • Soliloquist
    December 9, 2008
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    nice..im a fan
    looking forward to seeing more of your work


  • Devils.Delight
    December 9, 2008

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    Awesome!

    This poem was brilliant ! The flow was smooth, and the content incredible. I loved all the alliteration that you used throughout.

    Excellent ! I will read more of your work.

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