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A Dog's Life

 

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Sixteen years, now almost seventeen,
I've played at stick and ball, stayed seldom still
until good master's call would whistle shrill
to lead me back - no need to smack.  Sight keen.

Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
as boon companion, running round fun years.
His mother passed away, I shared the tears
that fountained forth and never seemed to end.

Sixteen years round each revolving moon
from hearth and home I pick up slightest sound,
ears prick, eyes bright, in sight I'm always found
to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.

Sixteen years, come rain or shine, we walk
twice, sometimes thrice a day, I sense each smell
around the house, know friends and rascals well,
and after dinner hear the table talk.

Sixteen years from pet to family,
from playful pat to priceless kith and kin,
I vet as threat who'd twins' affections win,
can smell a rat or chase cat up a tree.

Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
suffered unruly hands that now caress,
I guard them still, still at the same address,
as I will willing till my turn to go.

Sixteen years saw summers shedding hair,
saw autumns' colours charm birds from the trees,
saw winter whiteness whose bare branches' frieze
prepared for springs unbounded, weather fair.

Sixteen years, milk - nap - home-made pap brew,
from toothless start, heart full, until depart,
toothless, heart filled beyond all man may chart,
life's cycle spins till ready to renew.

Sixteen years that gambolled life away,
with water, beef and bone, I’ve played at will.
Scents seem less sharp today, and soon I will
make my last bow - still in thrill dreams I play !



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Animated Labrador Puppy - thanks to Sue Morten


Labrador Old  
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Definition gambol : play boisterously, light-hearted recreational activity for diversion or amusement
Definition vet : wordplay implying 'case the joint' or oversee more than in the sense of animal doctor
Definition frieze : horizontal band of sculpted or painted decoration
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In terms of life expectancy 1 'dog year' around between 6 and 7 human years. 16 is thus  approximately between 100 and 110. The world record for a cat's life is 38.

 


Stanza 3 : John Dryden Absalom and Achitophel, pt. 1, l. 545-50 (1681) Zimri,
But in the course of one revolving moon
Was chemist, fiddler, statesman and buffoon...
______


The initial poem wrote itself, drawn through and by a 16 year old labrador that joined four people in a small car for a long trip from Paris to St. Tropez New Year 1991/1992 ... 'and thereon hangs a tail's tale'

 

Jonathan Robin

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  • Macsword
    April 21

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    1, 101 comments...

    There is absolutely nothing left to say.

    All trophy honors and applause certainly warranted.

  • Son of Jim
    April 20
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    Thank you for sharing, from one dog lover.

  • i loved it...reminded me of my teachers springer spanial abby...she passed away almost 3 months ago, but the dogs heart still lives in the classes from whenever he started teaching till the class of 2014 (not my class, i'm 2013) R.I.P. Abby Egan...a very missed dog


  • ry weez
    April 20
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    Heart Warming

    I love dogs

  • poetrynovice
    April 20
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    Very Touching

    Many times our pets are closer to us than our actual human relatives. Thanks for sharing and well done.

  • Topnotchsy
    April 20

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    I'm sure I've commented on this (read it a number of times) but just in case I haven't left my applause, here they are. Nice write.


  • BearWoman gold member
    April 20

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    A very lovely poem.

    I have loved dogs all my life, and in some ways try to model my approach to life after theirs. This beautiful write expresses lovingly what it is (from a human perspective) to live a dog's life. they are good teacheres for us, IMO.

    A lovely poem with excellent meter, rhyme, and outstanding flow. I found the writing mostly invisible, drawn completely into the concepts portrayed, and could not help but cry.

    Beautiful.

  • abmsem
    April 19
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    Beautiful write. Thanks for entering


  • Gunther gold member
    April 18

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    When my girl Snowball, a Samoyed, (named by my youngest son, 4 at the time, for her brilliant white coat) was 16 she got so she couldn't walk. I mercifully had to put her down. One of the saddest day of my life.
    Beautiful tribute to one of the family.


  • Silent Words
    April 18
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    Very cute! Warm and light-hearted and just a great read overall. Very well done!


  • cyanastropyre
    April 18

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    Wow!

    so heartwarming, yet sad to see a loved one at the end of life
    If I were to give this poem a one-word description, it would be "cherished". Well done!

  • AWE!

    This was so adorable and such a wonderful piece.
    It made me almost cry though , it made me think of my pup.. you did an excellent job with this piece.
    good luck in contest,thanks for entering

  • icesc8ergirl
    April 14
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    Great write. best of luck and thanks for entering

  • pearlstp
    April 13

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    Great imagery, however it lost me in the closing line " " I shard the tears that fountainted forth...(here) and never seemed ( give me understanding). Other than this i like.


  • queenie
    April 13

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    well i guess with all the trophies, this speaks for itself. i think you did a great job with the rhyme pattern you chose. not an easy one to keep flowing and not lose the meter. that alone makes it a winner. the story told was captivating with moments of humor, sadness and love. my best in all the contest you place it in.


  • SpeakLove93
    April 13

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    Adorable

    This is such a lovely write. The vocablulary you use works very well. It's not too complex and yet not too simple. Such an exciting life of a dog. Nice job and thank you for entering!

  • DeeCrepit gold member
    April 13

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    Yours didn't chew?

    Our mostly malamute chews everything she can reach, besides all the bones the butcher can provide, books from the shelf, one shoe each from two pairs, a corner of hall wall until I rubbed it with raw hot pepper. She has chewed out pickets from the fence, one leg from the stepladder, and countless children's toys thus teaching them to put toys away. In the yard, she has dug holes halfway to China where we least need them, dug up most of the lilies and uprooted the roses.
    Expensive, past the shots and spaying, and dog license... I can hardly wait until she has grown past such puppy behaviour, and hesitate to think of sixteen years if not! She will have chewed us out of house and home. I won't even mention barking. Oh, I did.
    I'd trade for one like yours anytime.

    Enjoyed the poem a lot, and envied.
    Terry


  • Katilina
    April 12

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    I have worked with animals for a long time now and I really believe that humans and animals share an incredible bound. Their life spans are so much short than ours and in most cases we will be their when they die. Really rejoyed!


  • rufina caraid gold member
    April 12

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    A subject to touch many lives - certainly mine. Beautifully written from Puppy to old friend and all the events of life in between. Observing the children growing up was a particularly poignant memory. I notice you have read Spike Milligan, His story of a Dogs Life is so very different from yours: http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/9571-Spike-Milligan-The-Dog-Lovers. I much prefer your version – this is the one I relate to.

  • This is very sweet. What a great little write. And so very true for a lot of dogs. I thank you for entering this into my contest. You have 8 poems and your points will be divided equally with you having the ability to gain 13 points from each poem. This poem has received 11. Best of luck to you. kahy

  • Awwwww
    This made me think of my beloved Basset Hound, Oliver, who passed away about a year and a half ago
    He was one of my very best friends
    Thank you for sharing this; this is a wonderful piece

  • This write tugged on my heart strings.... my puppy turned 1 year today in human years. It feels like yesteray when she became part of our family. Another penning I really enjoyed!!


  • Simp
    April 3

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    Thanks for entering my first ever contest.
    I enjoyed reading this, makes me think how much I want a dog. How they become another person, more than just an animal.


  • Sprite silver member
    April 2

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    Thanks for entering!

    This poem hit me where I live. Our Lab (Buff colored too) Is coming up on 13, has insulin diabetes, skin problems, joint problems lost her sight (we had new lenses put in so she can see again) and is deaf now. Her back legs are going out from neuropathy and then...Your poem brought a tear to my eye. Codie is just like this. I can see her saying it to me with her eyes.

    Oh...very well written and I love your poem. ~ Joyce


  • Darkmoon
    April 1
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    This is very touching. I love animals. This is also a very sweet. Keep it and thanks for the entry.


  • Flowergirl
    March 28
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    very nice i love animals keep up the nice work and thank you for your entry keep it up....

  • poetrynovice
    March 24
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    Touching!

    I've been there with my special pet-friends. Very youching and special!


  • pranj
    March 24
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    WOW!!!!!! AMAZING!!!
    Great words! Absolutely enchanting!
    Sooooo cute!!!


  • brianmc
    March 24

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    heart warming

    great write really deserves the prizes, what a great friend to have an obvious inspiration ty for featuring it


  • LadyElbereth
    March 23

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    Simply Lovely

    I simple do not posses the words to tell you how wonderful this poem is what a tribute to that wonderful friend you took us along a wonderful sojourn your cadence as lovely as your verse. My heartfelt thank you for gifting us a chance to view the heart of such a wonderful friend and the heart of you. I enjoyed this read so very, very much indeed thank you!


    Lady E


  • VierSinneNur
    March 23

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    Lovin the Language

    I doubt that any poem could work as well as yours did with the language used. "Thrice" and "Kith and Kin" are not common-place terms. That coupled with the topic, a dogs life as it is lived, just makes for a gratifying read. Written in beautiful fashion, it's not hard to see why you got the gold.


  • lovingpoet
    March 23
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    very nice I like it and the pics are pretty

  • Arrakis
    March 16

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    The first picture before the poem is an incredible choice!
    I lke the way you showed us the meaning for a dog's life.
    Thanks!
    Do

  • lightwing
    March 16
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    A lovely poem that warms the heart conveys the affection of both dog and family. I loved the format it seemed to add to the feel of the fun and love within the poem.


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 15

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  • AzureBlue gold member
    March 11

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    Therapeutic!

    Thank you sooooo much for sending me this link in light of my dog's passing. Your poem touched my heart and did indeed lighten it a bit.
    I found the perspective amusing and accurate!
    The accolades you have received thus far, are quite well deserved.
    peace and hugs,
    Lorena~

  • Bassem
    March 10

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    A beautiful poem!

    This is a heartfelt poem that is wonderfully delivers on its concept through your ecceptional writing. This really makes me wanna spend my whole life with my dog. Amazing job! Keep it up!

  • Basti
    March 10

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    This is really nicely written. As the poem progressed, I felt like I was part of the 16 years that went by.
    You were able to describe the life of your dog so brilliantly, with the sad while at the same time optimistic note at the end.
    The alliterations were well chosen and you can really tell that you put a lot of thought and time not only into the poem itself, but also into the setting up of the page with the pictures.
    Glad you took the time to write from you heart, keep it up


  • brianmc
    March 10
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    cute

    nicely written, you must write great stuff about your loved ones if the dog gets this


  • MathiasThom
    March 10

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    excellent

    nice form on this! I have 2 labs that are 10 years old... Those 2 dogs still act like puppies...They are the best dogs ever...

  • awww , that's cute .


  • DarkHunter
    March 10

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    A touching piece that will tug on the heart of any animal lovers. It's sad that everything comes to an end someday that's why it's so important to cherish every moment. Thank you for sharing and wish you all the best.


  • stepbystep
    March 1

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    aww...

    this is so sweet!

    i love dogs!
    and you just made them more important to me.
    thanks!
    great job!


  • wwfhrocks14
    March 1
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    cute poem. sweet pics. i like the style and rhyme.

  • Sixteen years, now almost seventeen,
    I've played at stick and ball, stayed seldom still
    until good master's call would whistle shrill
    to lead me back - no need to smack. Sight keen.

    Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
    as boon companion, running round fun years.
    His mother passed away, I shared the tears
    that fountained forth and never seemed
    it is a very tender piece sentimental
    my aubt had a dog, princess
    we loved her as part of the family
    my cousins were like "this is our dog"
    loved her, so true
    17 years
    we mourned her
    i think dad came back one night
    and
    told us
    it was different the next time we visited, grandpa, aunt k, etc
    but
    she was still there, in a way
    my cousin said they buried her in the backyard
    and
    it was like as i was in the yard
    watching the guy fly his pidgeons
    (yeah, a long time ago, the pidgeon coops)
    she was there, too
    you wrote an enchanted work
    very good

  • Sixteen years, now almost seventeen,
    I've played at stick and ball, stayed seldom still
    until good master's call would whistle shrill
    to lead me back - no need to smack. Sight keen.

    Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
    as boon companion, running round fun years.
    His mother passed away, I shared the tears
    that fountained forth and never seemed
    it is a very tender piece sentimental
    my aubt had a dog, princess
    we loved her as part of the family
    my cousins were like "this is our dog"
    loved her, so true
    17 years
    we mourned her
    i think dad came back one night
    and
    told us
    it was different the next time we visited, grandpa, aunt k, etc
    but
    she was still there, in a way
    my cousin said they buried her in the backyard
    and
    it was like as i was in the yard
    watching the guy fly his pidgeons
    (yeah, a long time ago, the pidgeon coops)
    she was there, too
    you wrote an enchanted work
    very good


  • aanika
    February 28

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    Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
    as boon companion, running round fun years.
    His mother passed away, I shared the tears

    very touching poem.
    I loved the flow and rhyme.
    thanks for writing this.


  • thoughtfuldead
    February 28

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    Animals. I love dogs. This is just a simple reminder of how much I love my pets. Fantastic job!!! =)


  • VelvetWings
    February 27

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    This is lovely. Sixteen years is a very long time for a dog to live, and by the sound of these words I'm reading the dog lived a very happy life indeed. The pictures at the beginning and end really add to the poem; I felt a rush of emotion upon seeing the old doggy-face after I had seen the puppy only minutes before.
    This is a beautiful piece of work, thank you for sharing it with us.
    ~Sparrow

  • Helen20Margot
    February 27

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    Marvellously refreshing to read beautifully flowing traditional rhyme. A lovely tribute all dog lovers will respond to. Thank you

  • dvdtnr
    February 27
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    thank you, very nice

  • Epd
    February 24

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    this poem is so touching, reminded me of our dog Billy who passed on last year... always there, always with a wagging tail, always happy to see you; what wonderful creatures and you have captured their essence so well


  • Anu-Nataraj
    February 24
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    omg this is so amzing!
    so sad n adorable still
    good work n good luck


  • Yunalonei
    February 22

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    Amazing

    This is such an amazing piece of poetry.
    Any write which testifies to the maginificence of dogs is worth all the praise it can receive.


  • The Fun House silver member
    February 22

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    I've read this post several times due to it being featured and it is a great poem. All I can say is that you must truly being missing this little guy still as over 1000 comments are on it and still it takes a slot in the featured box. I truly am not meaning to be rude but don't you think it's time to let it rest and perhaps feature others less read It is good but I feel horrible clicking it again only to find I've seen it over an over and do not wish to waste your points


  • poet360
    February 22
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    aaaaw this is so heartwarming!!
    =)

  • graybeard
    February 21

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    great poem

    I've always been a dog love and have had a few to watch go through their life cycles. It always hurts when they take their final bow.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 21

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    Love the way you go into detail in a gogs life. And that a little over sixteen wonderful years. Your lucky to have mans best friend that long. Very much a pleasure to read. love animals.


  • Whispers of Hope
    February 21
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    Awww the pictures are soo cute I really enjoyed reading this !! Very well written piece here!

  • penelopephoebe
    February 20
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    lovely poem, really enjoyed it

  • klippies
    February 20

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    WoW !!! I just had to read it again, and again ... a Good life, a Dogs life, drawing to an end. I loved it, took me back many years to my own "Best Friend"

    What I also liked is the unconditional Love ...
    I've played ....
    I shared ....
    I pick up ....
    I sense ....
    I vet as ....
    I've watched ...
    and then ...... "I guard them still, ...as I will willing till my turn to go."

    Love the use of "gambolled"
    and the best for last ... "still in thrill dreams I play !"


  • forbidden2love
    February 19
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    loved it! makes me think about it more, and just an overall GREAT poem!!!


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 19

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    The story of man's best friend. This is an amazing write and I love how you've written it from the dog's point of view! Major Kudos on this write!!
    Keep up the good writing!


  • rbruce gold member
    February 19

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    A dogs life. Beneath my feet at this moment is a young dog, he's only 10. You have written this poem out so well with the puppy growing up, being a part of the family, then getting ready to cross the "Rainbow Bridge" to dogs heaven.

  • Judith Chandler
    February 12

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    "Scents seem less sharp today." I like this way of saying that the dog is no longer young. I enjoyed this write. You certainly conveyed the dog's devotion and loyalty to the household.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • PoJonez
    February 11

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    excellent poem, bringing forth visions of my favorite non-sapien friend.

    Sixteen years, now almost seventeen,
    I've played at stick and ball, stayed seldom still
    until good master's call would whistle shrill
    to lead me back - no need to smack. Sight keen.
    Sixteen years round each revolving moon
    from hearth and home I pick up slightest sound,
    ears prick, eyes bright, in sight I'm always found
    to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.

    excellent first person. just all around excellency.
    Thank you for sharing with us all


  • always-his-4ever
    February 11
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    great job!! keep it up!!


  • XPhantomanna99
    February 11

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    Oh my god. I loved your 'A Dog's Life Poem' I have a dog and I love him with all my heart. He's a miniature pinscher, namede Sebuko. NICE!


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    February 11

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    The short, curt, rather abrupt sentence structure here sounds appropriate for a poem in regard a lot of breeds of dogs. Something really sharp and yippy might be appropriate if writing, say, about a chihuahua or pomeranian. Longer smoother sentences for larger, brighter breeds. Your word choice here seems appropriate for the bulk of "caninery."


  • Littlefire
    February 10
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    barkingly good


  • LoveGoneMad
    February 9
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    interesting write, well done.

  • rlc
    February 9
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    very sweet rl

  • aaaaaaaa
    February 9

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    Hmmm I can see that you've spent a great deal of time on this. I like that. I think more people should have a passion for writing like you do. However I think this poem is rather choppy, and at times very cliche. One particular thing I noticed is that you rhymed the same word in the last stanza.. but I applaud your effort. I can see that you have much potential. Great job.


  • SeaWitch
    February 9
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    Very well done.

  • Shawnecy808
    February 9

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    Sixteen years round each revolving moon
    from hearth and home I pick up slightest sound,
    ears prick, eyes bright, in sight I'm always found
    to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.
    This write was fantastic I especially loved this stanza,and how its from the dogs view of life.Great Write!!

  • rebeliana
    February 8

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    Beautiful

    Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
    as boon companion, running round fun years.
    His mother passed away, I shared the tears
    that fountained forth and never seemed to end.

    Some may feel that animals can't understand humans, but I've always felt like the dogs I have had in my life understood me and comforted me in no way that cat or any other furry companion could. This is a remarkable description of what one wills to be the real inner workings of a true man's best friend. It invoked the memories of my most cherished pets, gone years ago but never truly forgotten. Thank you very much for sharing this with us.

  • I've been playing with my stick and ball for about 16 years now as well. I never get bored of it. Never.


  • Kochibo
    February 8

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    'to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.' I enjoyed this line quite a bit.

    Sweet poem, I get a sense of a true dog's heart in this poem. The guarding, playing, napping; realistic and sweet. It's nicely written without being overdone or too dramatic, good job.

    Alicia


  • Broken-Rickie
    February 7
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    Just amazing...the pictures are so cute. The imagery is awesome. Just overall a great write...


  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 7

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    aahhhh!!

    great poem written amazingly, one of my favorite reads on this site. i love the rhyme setup and how it all worked together so perfectly. i have a soft spot for animals so this poem touched me and made me smile. keep up the great work!

  • harryillingworth
    February 7

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    Sixteen years round each revolving moon
    from hearth and home I pick up slightest sound,
    ears prick, eyes bright, in sight I'm always found
    to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.

    Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
    suffered unruly hands that now caress,
    I guard them still, still at the same address,
    as I will willing till my turn to go.

    My two favourite stanzas. This is a great idea and really interesting to read.


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 7

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    Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
    suffered unruly hands that now caress,
    I guard them still, still at the same address,
    as I will willing till my turn to go.

    Sixteen years saw summers shedding hair,
    saw autumns' colours charm birds from the trees,
    saw winter whiteness whose bare branches' frieze
    prepared for springs unbounded, weather fair.


    my favorite part^^^^

    xoxo jane


  • Eeyore
    February 7

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    aw!

    i love your dog he's so adorable!!!!!! and that first picture is so great! how'd you do that? i guess just got lucky. i luv that poem!!!!!!!! i'm still awwwwwwwwwing!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • SwaGGtastic
    February 6

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    Nice Write

    Don't we all just wished we had a dogs life.. Sit on tha porch all day no worries except for 4wheels.. HaHa and all are food is brought to us.. Real Nice I like this..


  • awannabepoet
    February 6

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    I have two dogs at home and man they get the royal treatment, this sure shows how we humans can be loving and caring when we really want to.

    I like it, I like it so!

  • Lovely story to be getting on with, and that brings us into the canine world of no worry, like mine, nice write. Titus


  • Little-Buster gold member
    February 6
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    Wow.
    Great write, dogs have it so easy lol
    keep up the good work.

    -Buster


  • Gagiikwe
    February 6

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    Cheeky Critter

    Dog in light beam is great!
    My Lab-cross won't leave my bedside when he knows I'm in pain. But show some life and he most certainly knows how to gambol his life away!
    Enjoyable poem.


  • Free - Spirit
    February 5

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    perfect

    39 - 42 heartfelt
    you must really like dogs
    so do I
    love the pics - so cute
    also 29 - 32 was cool too
    chsing cat up tree was funny and adorable
    overall wole poem is very descriptive

  • emo me
    February 5
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    nice

    i wish i was a dog. such an easy life.


  • Erik Ambrose gold member
    February 5
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    SUPER AWESOME DUED>


  • LostMunkyGi
    February 5

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    Cute

    I have a dog now, named Sara, but this poem makes me teary-eyed because it reminds me of my old dog, Misty (I called MooBoo). I miss her. She passed away over ten years ago, but I still miss her.
    ~*~Gi~*~


  • Sunduiri
    February 5
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    I love this write. the rhyming is wonderful and has a very smooth and playful flow. Keep writing!

  • XHEAVENkiRAx
    February 1
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    the cutest poetry ive ever rea

  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 31
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    Beautiful

    Only in a dogs life. I can identify, I have a dog to. Wonderful Writing on this beautiful dog. Going along in his life. I was honered to read this. Also wonderful back ground.


  • Ms-Mouse
    January 31
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    Well written lovely poem!

  • juicyfruit
    January 30

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    I had a cat, Bracken, had to be put down at 16, he was my best friend, I cried so hard at the vet's office. I hated to leave him, but he nudged my face as if to say it's okay..this poem reminded me of my good times with him. Had another cat too, 21 years old, had to be put down, and his brother, 18..long times to have cats, wonderful pets..dogs too, cute pics.


  • sometimessick
    January 30
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    haha, aww so cute. very good poem. LOVE the pics, so adorable.


  • Rovingone gold member
    January 30

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    My little babe is sixteen now too and she has always been a blessing. Unfortunately, my lab left me after thirteen years, but I certainly can relate to all the goodness you portray in your story.

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