how do you get out of a hole you dug yourself into when you were all alone? calling for help doesnt work... your in way too deep... no ones around to hear you... clawing at the edge is dangerious, pulling the mud and dirt on top of you.. so what do you do? sit there and wait for death? think of ways to make him come sooner? till your only there physical... passed the brink of insanity long ago... waiting for death, pacing in your grave. you kno it will all be over soon but its been to long, your in too deep struggling to get out hoping for someone, anyone to through you a ladder you call out your name.... but no one seems to care because youve always been in too deep.
im scott (im a girl) to all who care... i dunno sum of my poems are sad... most of them are infacts but thats jus me.... i want to kno if you like them so write me er what ever my aol sn is TheWhiteRabbit72 if you want to talk
if you wanna see me go here:
profiles.myspace.com/users/5121619
have fun and enjoy!
im scott (im a girl) to all who care... i dunno sum of my poems are sad... most of them are infacts but thats jus me.... i want to kno if you like them so write me er what ever my aol sn is TheWhiteRabbit72 if you want to talk
if you wanna see me go here:
profiles.myspace.com/users/5121619
have fun and enjoy!
- Last seen on Apr 7 3:23 AM. Member since February 6, 2004.
- I'm a topaz horse poet for 18 comments.
- I am a 17 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a unstable teen.
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Torked on February 24, 2004Well, in responce to your IM, I read your poems. They arn't really to my taste, I have to admit, however you do have a level of skill that I can see going somewhere. Of course, it's not as though my words carry and weight, appart from the copper in my two cents. Keep it up, though, I would like to see where your poetry eventualy leads you to.
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Barbie on February 16, 2004Hey there, I found an IM from you asking me to read your poems, so, naturally, I did. They are all very similar - you have a talent for conveying intense emotion. I like your 'rhyming couplet' type style. The only thing that put me off your poems were a few spelling mistakes/typos. Barbie. Xx
