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*_Conversation Among The Ruins_ by Sylvia Plath
*
'Through portico of my elegant house you stalk
With your wild furies disturbing garlands of fruit
And the fabulous lutes and peacocks, rending the net
Of all decorum which holds the whirlwind back.
Now, rich order of walls is fallen; rooks croak
Above the appalling ruin; in bleak light
Of your stormy eye, magic takes flight
Like a daunted witch, quitting castle when real days break.

Fractured pillars frame prospects of rock;
While you stand heroic in coat and tie, I sit
Composed in Grecian tunic and psyche-knot,
Rooted to your black look, the play turned tragic:
Which such blight wrought on our bankrupt estate,
What ceremony of words can patch the havoc?'




*and _A Martian Sends A Postcard Home_ by Craig Raine*

Caxtons are mechanical birds with many wings
and some are treasured for their markings-

they cause the eyes to melt
or the body to shriek without pain.

I have never seen one fly, but
sometimes they perch on the hand.

Mist is when the sky is tired of flight
and rests its soft machine on the ground:

then the world is dim and bookish
like engravings under tissue paper.

Rain is when the earth is television.
It has the properites of making colours darker.

Model T is a room with the lock inside --
a key is turned to free the world

for movement, so quick there is a film
to watch for anything missed.

But time is tied to the wrist
or kept in a box, ticking with impatience.

In homes, a haunted apparatus sleeps,
that snores when you pick it up.

If the ghost cries, they carry it
to their lips and soothe it to sleep

with sounds. And yet, they wake it up
deliberately, by tickling with a finger.

Only the young are allowed to suffer
openly. Adults go to a punishment room

with water but nothing to eat.
They lock the door and suffer the noises

alone. No one is exempt
and everyone's pain has a different smell.

At night, when all the colours die,
they hide in pairs

and read about themselves --
in colour, with their eyelids shut.




'and we should die of that roar which lies on the other side of silence'
                              -- *George Eliot, Middlemarch*




'Don't you read the papers?
Economics is gonna save us-
And science never sleeps.'
            *-- Pitchshifter*

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  • i love vaseline on September 2, 2005
    Yeah on rereading it, the swearing isn't all that bad, but I think maybe you need to spread it out more, not so many fucks close together...(haha)...it's not that I think they're offensive or nowt, it's just you shouldn't use any word too much too close. It is a real good write though, particularly the opening.
  • CoolHandLuke on September 2, 2005
    Hey thanks for your critique, I think the cussing was effective in my mind...it was overused and played out, sort of like the addiction I was trying to write about. Thanks for your words doll.
  • i love vaseline on July 11, 2005
    damn straight! i'm impressed to find another enthusiast
  • vaseline on July 8, 2005
    vaseline kicks ass

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