Pleasure turns to the pain
of the lessons learned from the strained of the questions burned in my brain
about wether luv will remane in his touch
these thoughts are like samon swimming up stream
in tears of your deseat
fighting the current that kills more than the chaos of our inner emoations
chaos because of the plug that has bin pulled from my undieing soul
seperation not as simple as the distance between us
my mind no longer possed by the demonds
that have been the over estamte of your life
this sea is so deep that it has cracked that foundation
of wat we once shared....
My loneliness is like the night air
Invisable to the eye
Obvious to the touch
of the lessons learned from the strained of the questions burned in my brain
about wether luv will remane in his touch
these thoughts are like samon swimming up stream
in tears of your deseat
fighting the current that kills more than the chaos of our inner emoations
chaos because of the plug that has bin pulled from my undieing soul
seperation not as simple as the distance between us
my mind no longer possed by the demonds
that have been the over estamte of your life
this sea is so deep that it has cracked that foundation
of wat we once shared....
My loneliness is like the night air
Invisable to the eye
Obvious to the touch
- Last seen on Jan 22 12:27 PM. Member since December 20, 2006.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 24 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "My lyfe".
- I am a 19 year old woman from Delaware (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Singing, dancing, or working bingo at the fire house.
- I have 24 comments, 8 poems
My Poetry
-
all alone in my thoughts
in my room
Guest Book
1 - 3 of 3
-
SelLuca : thanx for the props on March 30, 2008thanx. i really like whats wrong with me.
you have a good chance of becoming pro too. ^^ -
Sylar on January 7, 2007Well just want to thank you for your comment on my poetry hope this year will bring you lots of brilliant idea's!
The Riviera Kid x -
grannyeri on January 7, 2007Just want to welcome you to this site. Hope you enjoy writing, commenting, entering contests and taking some classes while you are here. Thanks for the comment on my poetry earlier. May 2007 be a good year for writing for you and all here on AP.
