- Last seen on Jul 24 10:44 PM. Member since August 2, 2006.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 38 comments.
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Here is the right place to post2 lines, 2 comments, February 28, 2007 -
soma to axon I’m building to a frenzy,
(thankful for my myelin sheath) -
Handkerchief moments, picked from pockets
of shoeless days
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- Schizophrenia, Death and Reincarnation - Part II (The Next Generation) at sharepoetry
i sit in his chair / and wear his clothes / i fuck his wife / and beat his children / i see him in the mirror / and grin at his weakness / i look through his eyes / but i see the world clearer than he / / he rages while i wee - Schizophrenia, Death and Reincarnation - Part I at sharepoetry
he sits in my chair / and wears my clothes / he sleeps with my wife / and plays with my children / he looks at me in the mirror / and flashes my smile / he has my eyes / but i don’t see the world like him / / i rage when he s - Durer’s Hands (a Petrarchan Sonnet ) at sharepoetry
Hands pray for strength, lest they fall to sorrow, / bent digits clothed in worn and tired skin, / coveted loyalty engrained within. / Penetrating bone of fingers narrow / crippled, affliction in blood and marrow. / Hard labor accepted for love
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hobby on August 15, 2006I always appreciate an opinion on my work, and would welcome any feedback you have. Thanks stopping by
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Sabrinasgarden on August 14, 2006Just stopped by-such interest was taken in my work so possibly I could do same at some stage.
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0darkAngel0 on August 3, 2006allow me to add you...
i'm into dark , angst depression bleh.
so i findit hard to write mushy stuffs.
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hobby on August 3, 2006Ha ha, I'm just new here and wanted to make sure I did my bit in the offering critique, before submitting a poem. I do have one which requires eyes other than my own, so I'll go post it now. Thanks for looking in by.
