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I'm knew to all this, and would really appreciate comments and critisism as I've never shared my poetry before.

  • Last seen on Oct 30 7:39 AM. Member since April 10, 2008.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 89 comments.
  • I am a 16 year old woman (Great Britain)
  • I have 89 comments, 3 contests, 26 poems

My Poetry

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  • Is there a line?
    Is there a line from my heart to yours?
    Because it seems mine's all tangled up in you,
    20 lines, September 3
  • You kissed her on the coach
    You kissed her on the coach and you used my name in vain,
    but still I tell myself it can be the same,
    20 lines, 3 comments, August 17. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Love, Life, Lyrics
  • Fear
    Fear of loosing all she said,
    Fear of loosing none,
    18 lines, 2 comments, June 30
  • Reserved
    0 lines, 1 comment, June 30

Guest Book

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  • XNevermindX on April 26, 2008
    Hiya, i have read all your poems and they are amazing and so heart felt... ~.~ *Sad face*
  • risewiththesmoke on April 23, 2008
    hey, welcome to the site and congrats on the gold!!!

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