- Last seen 6 hours ago. Member since July 25.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 167 comments.
- I am a 81 year old person
- I am in the groups Birthday Roasts and Toasts Post, Rhyme and Meter Workshop, Winklers Poetry and Grammar Discussion, Winklings, Winklings Teaching Group led by Vera R, Wise Poets Society
- I have 167 comments, 2 contests, 81 poems
My Poetry
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Some Jacobs cream crackers, some butter, a slice of strong cheese,
Some frost-crispened celery, neatly laid out on a plate.14 lines, 3 comments, November 22. In Humor -
An almost inaudible tapping?
Even fainter than lake-water lapping?6 lines, 1 comment, November 20
Guest Book
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tara wilson : hey... on October 21i appreciate your comment and critique, i found it more offensive than helpful and constructive, that is why i only take critique from people who i respect and who know how to give it.
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Rheea on September 23This site may not be for you. You may need to look for one that is as brilliant as you are.. Please do not come to my page I know I can not withstand the scrutiny
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TheSpecialProduct on August 21Thank you for you honest critique on my poem.
It was surely a different approach I took towards writing; I'm sorry that it wasn't of your greatest interest. Take Care
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Bluemonday : Hi again on August 15I thought I recognised the style....
