.
the dust has only just begun to form
crop circles in the carpet
sinking
feeling
spin me round again
and rub my eyes
this can't be happening
when busy streets
amess with people
would stop to hold
their heads
heavy
hide and seek
trains and sewing machines
all those years
they were here first
oily marks appear on walls
where pleasure moments hung
before the takeover
the sweeping insensitivity of this
still life
hide and seek
trains and sewing machines
oh, you won't catch me around here
blood and tears
they were here first
.
..
.
.
the dust has only just begun to form
crop circles in the carpet
sinking
feeling
spin me round again
and rub my eyes
this can't be happening
when busy streets
amess with people
would stop to hold
their heads
heavy
hide and seek
trains and sewing machines
all those years
they were here first
oily marks appear on walls
where pleasure moments hung
before the takeover
the sweeping insensitivity of this
still life
hide and seek
trains and sewing machines
oh, you won't catch me around here
blood and tears
they were here first
.
..
.
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- Last seen right now. Member since November 17, 2008.
- I'm a gasoline dream poet for 1,535 comments.
- I am a 17 year old man from Texas (United States)
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- I have 1,535 comments, 17 contests, 10 columns, 178 poems
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too many nights i contemplated
when she must have died32 lines, 9 comments, October 20 -
over the course of the past three months
i think i've fallen into the beginnings of love40 lines, 21 comments, October 11
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the first thing i must have known
was that i meant to find and love you28 lines, 10 comments, November 18 -
you died a long time ago
never having read any of my poems29 lines, 20 comments, November 17 -
so many things i want to do.
but i don't.40 lines, 15 comments, November 16
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- Column: if you are going to hate me... at allpoetry
- Column: stop copying other people's poetry at allpoetry
DO NOT take things that other people on the site have written and then just rephrase it to call it your own.
if you can't write about something on your own, don't write.
be an artist, please.
just be your
own
arti - Column: what do you think of my writing? at allpoetry
answer the question honestly, please. don't leave anything out.
i can take criticisms if you see it necessary.
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Amarillistarshot on November 19*wants dammit...
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Amarillistarshot on November 19she want to go home
but nobody's home
it's where she lies
broken inside... -
alaska. on November 6http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Za-V_lhwGg&feature=channel
I just wanted to show someone. -
heavenbird on November 5EVERYWHERE YOU LOOK, EVERYWHERE YOU LOOK..
THERE'S A HEART! A HAND TO HOLD ONTO!
^ thought you needed to know that.
