Greenewhiplash

I wear a cape.

Last seen on Nov 18 2:22 AM. Member since December 5, 2003.
I'm a moonstone path poet for 496 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "I am a victim of self-pity.".
I am a 19 year old girl (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a dancing, singing, collage-making, movie-watching, DeVotchKa-loving, teenager with big hair.
Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/greenewhiplash
I have 496 comments, 2 contests, 64 poems, 20 stories

My Poetry

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Your Soul Was a Clearence Item

Your soul is a
store-bought metaphor
quivering atop your diaphragm

19 lines, 2 comments, May 20, 2008
Shields of Stripes and Plaids

In a row of stone buildings
it is linen we choose to shield us from the storm

44 lines, 1 comment, May 19, 2008
The Wreckage

I chose to lay here in this empty space to experience the lack of you, exposing every follicle and fiber to the chill of your absence

30 lines, 1 comment, May 19, 2008. In Humanity, Angst, Longing, Self, Love, Personal
Waiting for Our Violins to Play

We cannot choke on our frustrations
without emphasis
so we will go on waiting for the music

24 lines, 1 comment, May 17, 2008. In Society

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There Was Death In His Eyes - Chapter 1

He was momentary. A fleeting life standing there with her, only to last so long.

692 lines, 5 comments, April 10, 2007. In 600-2000 words, Dark, Death, Strange, Tragedy, Unfinished
TLWDYB - Writing Exercise: Caleb & Joan

1116 lines, 2 comments, April 19, 2006. In 600-2000 words, Fragment, Young adult
The Four Troubled Friends

667 lines, 3 comments, November 9, 2005. In <200 lines, Depression, Young adult

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The Whoring Soul of a Virgin at sharepoetry
We'll bite our unkissed lips and unveil our thighs in pseudo-seductive pleas for more than just pithy unimpressed glances.

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McFairy on September 5, 2007

If I could write like you I would resign and do nothing else the whole day!!
Piscean soul on March 3, 2007

You are a wonderful writer my dear Abbi.
p.s: I want to write so badly!
GlassSlippers on October 9, 2006

Thank you again. It matters very much to me.
lone rhymer on September 26, 2006

thanx for my comment. i think big jammies work well aswell.