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Friends, poets, citizens

... Unfortunately our small secret seems to leak out and better say it up front rather than keep it as mysterious as we intended it to be. This name is shared by several poets (poets and poetesses, lol) here on AP, and the poems and stories originate from different minds. This is the reason the styles differ so much from one to the other. The idea was to be able to get a real honest evaluation and criticism of what we write, rather than the usual "great work" comments of nice friends. However some unpleasant mix ups of identity happened, therefore this message. We believe our poems are high quality, so we did not cheat our readers. We hope for your understanding.

Last seen on Aug 17 2:26 PM 2007. Member since November 30, 2004.
I'm a jade dragon poet for 298 comments.
When I'm not writing, I'm a poet.
I have 298 comments, 98 poems, 15 stories

My Poetry

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Letter To death

Dear death,
Please forgive my not using capitals for your name,

89 lines, 8 comments, August 29, 2005. In Other, Dark
Ship Of Pain

Ship of pain
Lost at sea

42 lines, May 24, 2005. In Hope, Angst
Glimpse

I look at her
By your side

27 lines, 10 comments, May 23, 2005. In Love
Always

33 lines, 16 comments, May 10, 2005. In Personal, Love

My Stories

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Love, Three

"So much on my mind, I am so tired, I wish to close my eyes and never wake up..." I stirred underneath her, almost jumping up in alarm. She closed her fingers around my wrist a

490 lines, 4 comments, March 26, 2005. In <200 lines, Romance
French Fries

"I like my french fries with mayonnaise," I said, dipping my first crispy potato stud in the oily yellow stuff and sighing with satisfaction while snapping its soft whitish bel

876 lines, March 25, 2005. In <200 lines, Humor, Romance
Crazy?

I picked up the grain of sand from her hand, pried her fingers open as she refused to part with it, placed it carefully in a vise and with hammer and chisel started working on

924 lines, March 21, 2005. In <200 lines, Romance

Guest Book

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Manoura xx on November 9, 2006

YOU HAVENT WRITTEN ANYTHING FOR A WHOLE YEAR!!!!!!!
Just4u on January 1, 2005

When not writing you're a poet
or dear how can that be
Merely composing in your head
for no one else to see

Words thrown out in freeform
or strung tighly through a verse
If kept inside will haunt for sure
so write them down or live the curse... lol

Just having a bit of fun with your bio line
up there...only teasing ok...

Now on to the words...er...I mean poems

Happy New Year
Eddy
SangLune on December 9, 2004

hello there thanx for your comment and whats your name?but thanx anyway,bye
green on December 6, 2004

thank you tomie, and this is the first comment on my author's page, what a pleasure...