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Gothic freakShow poetry

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Okies dokie, time for a profile update... I'm a 16 year old british girl with my own ideas on fashion(and pretty much anything) I don't like to conform to groups, and before you ask the whole gothic freak thing is not only several years old, but was a 'nickname' several smart allecks thought was fun.

I'm into music in a BIG way, I would list some of my favourite bands, but there are some many I don't know where to start. I generally like all types of metal, rock, screamo etc. but I'm willing to listen to anything before destroying it.

I'm very individual. Also slighty sadistic... lol back off haha I love the reaction at that. Even if you think you know me, you'll only ever know me on one level because that's all I will have shown you, and for good reason. I'm a very deep and complex person with a mind to match, even if I do seem like a bit of an airhead at times.

My english is awfull, that includes spellings(before you correct me there lol) puctuation, grammer and use of words. If I make a mistake point it out in a nice way and I'll correct it, and thank you when I pass my GCSE, if you put it in a nasty way I'll probably snap and not only rip your head off and watch the red water ooze out, but first torture you untill you admit I am the best, and you want to die afterall...would I do a thing like that...

They say people are only affraid of the unknown, and I know for a fact what they don't understand scares them also, if you don't understand something, rather than running away why not try harder? Get your head around it, ask for help, it doesn't show weakness it's the running that'll do that for you. By running I don't just mean physically, but also emotionally and spiritually. It's not always easy, but once you understand it will be slightly more so.

My poetry is usually just any strong emotions, experiences or messages I need to publish at the time I wrote it. I may seem intrinsic at times, but I need people to understand me, sometimes mystery is not always good. I accept fair, constructive critisism. However, slagging something off, just for the sake of acting 'hard' is not effective, helpful or welcome here. I will hunt you down and murder you. I'm not joking either Attacking somebody's personal works and expression of emotions is not acceptable in my world, as with many other things which I will fight against untill I die.

I can't think of much to say at the moment, but I hope you enjoy my 'works' however poor they are(especially my earlier ones) and untill we speak again ROCK ON!!!!!!

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I think if you have some spare time you should check some of my friends poetry out(It's not a request...it's an order lol), cuz they're good poets, and I belive in biggin' up mates!

* penname ( Cuz he's a great poet, and he put me on his site...and I am not better than him!)

* AndrewHide (Cus he's a great poet, and he's my mates dad!)

* BeckieBoo (Cuz she's great, and she's Andrews daughter!)

* leftyfreak (Cuz he's an ace poet, and great singer and guitarist...and he's really fit!)

* idontknow (Cuz she's a great poet, and she goes to my school!)

* HiddenTruth (Cuz she's a good poet and a mate)

I'm sorry if I missed anyone out!

~~gothic freak~~

Enjoy it while you can, for tomorrow you may not have the ability to do so. Life is for living, not worry.

My Poetry

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  • I look towards the laptop, to really see the truth.I'm looking at your words,am I really wasting youth?
    I can't go back,there's noone left.I can't move forwards,without turning to theft.I need a break,somewhere to turn.
    7 lines, March 31. In Love, Life, Personal
  • Your breath against my neck,
    You touch against my skin,
    20 lines, October 1, 2006. In Personal, Hope
  • Nothing but the futile attempts to succeed.
    Nothing but the emptiness within.
    13 lines, 1 comment, July 6, 2006. In Personal, Dark
  • Withered and torn,
    But she's still alive.
    15 lines, 3 comments, March 26, 2006. In Personal, Dark, Hope

My Stories

  • She had forever envisaged his delicate stroking of her skin, her head resting on his chest, the rhythmic beating of his heart pounding in her head, snugly nestled in his arms,
    346 lines, 1 comment, November 21, 2005. In <200 lines, Other, Romance

Guest Book

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  • just77 on January 21, 2006
    just wanted to let you know, if you try to IM me, and i seem to be "away", please try anyways... im usually here at the house, or sleeping. if i dont say anything back, its only because im not physically at the computer, or sleeping or something.

    later!
  • just77 on January 4, 2006
    oh, one more thing... if you ever want ot get in touch with me by way of IM chat, here are my nicknames on IM...

    msm- justinmcash@yahoo.com
    aol aim- piratemonkey77
    yahoo- justincash77
    icq- 296327905

    yeah, im all over the place.. haha. hope to talk to you soon!

    justin
  • just77 on January 4, 2006
    HEY!!! i hope your well, and i havnt forgotten about you! i RARELY come onto allpoetry anymore.... and its possible they sometimes delete messages. id like, though, to keep in contact. im still over at justincash.blogspot.com and my email addy is justincash77@gmail.com that addy is for the ppl i trust to not send me forwards. there are ppl who ive known for years who have never even heard of that email addy. haha.

    anyways, kepe oin touch, and i hope xmas and new years was good.

    justin
  • just77 on October 7, 2005
    HEY! how are you? i havnt been on here much lately. hope your doing well.

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