hey hey peeps.
here's a lil aboot me.
I am a coutry guy. Born and raised. from charleton Ontario, Canada.
as you can see I don't care about how I spell words.
I am currently livin in New Liskeard
As you can teel by reading my stuff that I was trying to get over a realationship that I had.
I just used this to vent so I didn't blowup on the one person I cared about.
to that person (I still love you girl) more than you will ever know.
but i can honestly say that even though i will always love you i will never be able to go out with you again
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*A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road..
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.
(In the paper the next day)
A motorcycle crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.
If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page asap!!
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Every poem I have written is dedicated to walkingcorpse.
We started going out on june 10 2005 at 6:30pm and broke up october 7 2005 at 10:30pm And now we got back together in june
Know to the readers which is you.
I don't care how blunt you are.
You couldn't possibly hurt me more than I am.
Tell me what you like what you hate and what could be changed.
I will try my best to return the favour.
All the stuff I wrote is what I was feeling at that time.
If this helps anyone feel better than great it is not intended to bring people down.
here is one of the best songs ever writen
savin' me by nickelback
Prison gates won’t open up for me
On these hands and knees I’m crawlin’
Oh, I reach for you
Well I’m terrified of these four walls
These iron bars can’t hold my soul in
All I need is you
Come please I’m callin’
And oh I scream for you
Hurry I’m fallin’
Show me what it’s like
To be the last one standing
And teach me wrong from right
And I’ll show you what I can be
Say it for me
Say it to me
And I’ll leave this life behind me
Say it if it’s worth saving me
Heaven’s gates won’t open up for me
With these broken wings I’m fallin’
And all I see is you
These city walls ain’t got no love for me
I’m on the ledge of the eighteenth story
And oh I scream for you
Come please I’m callin’
And all I need from you
Hurry I’m fallin’
Show me what it’s like
To be the last one standing
And teach me wrong from right
And I’ll show you what I can be
Say it for me
Say it to me
And I’ll leave this life behind me
Say it if it’s worth saving me
Hurry I’m fallin’
I have never written poetry before so if you think I should stop before I get started please tell me. I will consider anything you tell me.
So without further ado here is my poetry.
here's a lil aboot me.
I am a coutry guy. Born and raised. from charleton Ontario, Canada.
as you can see I don't care about how I spell words.
I am currently livin in New Liskeard
As you can teel by reading my stuff that I was trying to get over a realationship that I had.
I just used this to vent so I didn't blowup on the one person I cared about.
to that person (I still love you girl) more than you will ever know.
but i can honestly say that even though i will always love you i will never be able to go out with you again
---------------------------------------------------------
*A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road..
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.
(In the paper the next day)
A motorcycle crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.
If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page asap!!
---------------------------------------------------------
Every poem I have written is dedicated to walkingcorpse.
We started going out on june 10 2005 at 6:30pm and broke up october 7 2005 at 10:30pm And now we got back together in june
Know to the readers which is you.
I don't care how blunt you are.
You couldn't possibly hurt me more than I am.
Tell me what you like what you hate and what could be changed.
I will try my best to return the favour.
All the stuff I wrote is what I was feeling at that time.
If this helps anyone feel better than great it is not intended to bring people down.
here is one of the best songs ever writen
savin' me by nickelback
Prison gates won’t open up for me
On these hands and knees I’m crawlin’
Oh, I reach for you
Well I’m terrified of these four walls
These iron bars can’t hold my soul in
All I need is you
Come please I’m callin’
And oh I scream for you
Hurry I’m fallin’
Show me what it’s like
To be the last one standing
And teach me wrong from right
And I’ll show you what I can be
Say it for me
Say it to me
And I’ll leave this life behind me
Say it if it’s worth saving me
Heaven’s gates won’t open up for me
With these broken wings I’m fallin’
And all I see is you
These city walls ain’t got no love for me
I’m on the ledge of the eighteenth story
And oh I scream for you
Come please I’m callin’
And all I need from you
Hurry I’m fallin’
Show me what it’s like
To be the last one standing
And teach me wrong from right
And I’ll show you what I can be
Say it for me
Say it to me
And I’ll leave this life behind me
Say it if it’s worth saving me
Hurry I’m fallin’
I have never written poetry before so if you think I should stop before I get started please tell me. I will consider anything you tell me.
So without further ado here is my poetry.
- Last seen on Sep 28 3:34 AM. Member since December 2, 2005.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 139 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.
- I am a 20 year old guy (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a a hick trying to get to his love.
- I have 139 comments
My Poetry
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i didn't turn and run
i didn't just walk away24 lines, 2 comments, January 13, 2007 -
we went out once
and we broke up -
all this i feel for a girl that once never acknowledged my existence43 lines, 6 comments, September 15, 2006. In Love
