My name is Jane and i'm a complete newbie to poetry 
I hope to be forgiven for lots, but I will appreciate any comments, constructive or otherwise! I guess my style is free write, as I am a beginner and have yet to familiarize myself with different forms. I'm also wary of how I would be able to deal with writing within a restricted style, as i'm so new to this. I hope to learn and improve, it's been a while since i've had to apply myself in a learning capacity. I want to find time to be more creative, not so much to see if I have a talent for it, but as a form of expression.
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AP Family: ( Looking for members, let me know if you're interested! )
* Husband * - Stephen Downie
* Daughter * - XxAmongtheBrokenxX
* Daughter * - Metalchica
* Sister * - maralisa
* Nephew * - Xcoldsummer
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~~~~~~ She's fantastic ~~~~~~
Seclusion from the world around
She's up all night inside a bottle
Communicate without a sound
No one understands her
But she's fantastic
Her keyboard rattles in the early hours
She's trying to reach out to the world
I wish it would reach back for her
and hold her golden heart
Because she's fantastic.
~~ Written by my wonderful
AP husband Stephen Downie ~~
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I hope to be forgiven for lots, but I will appreciate any comments, constructive or otherwise! I guess my style is free write, as I am a beginner and have yet to familiarize myself with different forms. I'm also wary of how I would be able to deal with writing within a restricted style, as i'm so new to this. I hope to learn and improve, it's been a while since i've had to apply myself in a learning capacity. I want to find time to be more creative, not so much to see if I have a talent for it, but as a form of expression. **************************************************
AP Family: ( Looking for members, let me know if you're interested! )
* Husband * - Stephen Downie
* Daughter * - XxAmongtheBrokenxX
* Daughter * - Metalchica
* Sister * - maralisa
* Nephew * - Xcoldsummer
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~~~~~~ She's fantastic ~~~~~~
Seclusion from the world around
She's up all night inside a bottle
Communicate without a sound
No one understands her
But she's fantastic
Her keyboard rattles in the early hours
She's trying to reach out to the world
I wish it would reach back for her
and hold her golden heart
Because she's fantastic.
~~ Written by my wonderful
AP husband Stephen Downie ~~
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- Last seen on Nov 2 9:40 AM. Member since March 30.
- I'm a diamond love poet for 216 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is "on the cusp of something or other". - I am a 33 year old woman (Cyprus)
- When I'm not writing, I'm trying to keep my sanity....
- I am in the groups Comments for All, Do you want your poem read, Get Read, So you want comments, The Poets of Nature, Visions through Haiku
- I have 216 comments, 11 poems
Poems I'm focused on
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8 lines, 12 comments, April 15. In Abstract, Weird, Personal, Life, Fantasy, My own style, My life, Lost in thought
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16 lines, 5 comments, April 5. In Contest, Inspirational
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10 lines, 11 comments, April 2. In Hope, Life, Thoughts, Personal, Friendship, Dedication, Inspirational, Message
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My Poetry
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2 lines, 7 comments, April 19. In Haiku, Dedication, Personal, Thoughts, Life, Lost in thought, Inspirational
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Bruce on June 16Hi Jane! We've missed you on AP!
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Metalchica on May 15hi mommy
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Draig aine : glade to have found you on May 10haiku on!!
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Stephen Downie on April 21Just sending you some love
Keep writing and keep inspiring
