In a nutshell -
"I was being chased and I was blind to the road ahead but the road behind was darker and I was running and it hurt so badly but I was running and I felt so free and liberated and I no longer felt like an outcast and I knew that this was the only place I would ever belong, with fear in my heart and blood on my feet and freedom in my eyes, with the moon shining only for me."
take it easy.
x
oh, PS thanks so much to everybody who has taken the time to write critiques
"I was being chased and I was blind to the road ahead but the road behind was darker and I was running and it hurt so badly but I was running and I felt so free and liberated and I no longer felt like an outcast and I knew that this was the only place I would ever belong, with fear in my heart and blood on my feet and freedom in my eyes, with the moon shining only for me."
take it easy.
x
oh, PS thanks so much to everybody who has taken the time to write critiques
- Last seen on Nov 9 1:44 PM. Member since November 8, 2003.
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- I am a 18 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.

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point and laugh on April 1, 2006hey i was just reading your profile and you looked like good friend matierial well i better go read some of your poems
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mike a rodriguez on January 25, 2006you once told me that you liked poems that start with "and." i guess if you have a collection of stories titled so, you weren't kidding.
i thought i'd bring some news to your author page. april 03 2005 seems a little dated.
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fatfreddy on April 3, 2005Hey Justin! Cheers for the comment - I haven't actually posted anything for ages so everything on here is fairly old now, but still, it was lovely to see it's still being read. xxx
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marrow on February 21, 2005Hello there!
So far I have read through your two latest works, and I am far more than impressed. I have added you to my favorites list, and am anxious to further read your writings.
Justin
