So I am a big fan of writing in general. I try to write a lot of stuff but so far I have two short stories and a lot of poems (not too many are freestyle either). I'm kind of a sucker for rhyming so doing anything without a certain structure just doesn't work for me. I need to get some feedback on my writing though - new or old work critiques - because I need to fix some stuff. Anyways, I hope that you like my poems. That's pretty much all I have to say so TTFN!
- Last seen on Nov 9 12:34 AM. Member since October 7, 2007.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 94 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "That's what you get when you let your heart win...".
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- I have 94 comments, 5 contests, 66 poems
My Poetry
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They say the little things matter
And I thought I had understood.34 lines, 1 comment, July 24 -
I was sitting in the kitchen
Waiting for daddy to get home.53 lines, 2 comments, July 13 -
Another day invades the small room where we sleep.
Our muscles ache in protest as we rise for another day's labor.38 lines, 1 comment, July 1 -
There are so many things in life
That you say I have yet to learn,23 lines, 1 comment, May 30
