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Poetry where you don't have to have a scholarship in English to understand.

Performing poetry is designed to perform/deliver a thought-provoking 'act' to the reader.  Easily accessible so that you may ponder and produce your response to the poem without effort. 

 

 

Introducing FantasySmurf previously known as Silver, War Child, and Therese.  I live in Dunedin, South Island, Aotearoa (New Zealand), "choice eh bro?".  I have been writing poetry since high school, where everyone realised that I had a talent. I never really took myself seriously, but kept up the writing and publishing.

 

  • I am part Maori, part Scottish and proud to be a kiwi!  I can sometimes be construed as arrogant, but "that's just pride f_____g widcha" - Ving Rhames as Marsellus Wallace in Pulp Fiction.

 

I looove sport and wish I had the co-ordination of my limbs to partake.  Alas!  (You should see me try to dance.)  My favourite sports are A1GP motor racing, Netball, Kickboxing, one-day long cricket matches, America's Cup yachting (though Im getting put off by all the politics - its just a SPORT!) and really enjoy watching world events, the Olympics and Commonwealth Games.  I also strongly support Tibet, so I'm an activist in Human Rights, as well as the rights of animals, children and the defenceless.

 

The Introvert Vs. The Extrovert

I have a vast range of subjects, themes and styles. I feel it’s the words that decide how they should appear on the page - I just write them down! (And of course edit afterward).  Some offensive language may occur - yes Im over 18!!!  It has been censored for the younger viewers of whom I do not wish to follow in my rebellious footsteps.  If anybody holds offense to my true expressionism - I apologise in advance.

I believe we can make this world a better place.
It gives me great pleasure to write and love sharing my thoughts to all who listen. Innocent


Many thanks to all the great writers out here that have made me think, feel and act stronger.  My writing has come through leaps and bounds:

T H A N K   Y O U x.

Imagery, Power, Emotions, Impact, Focus, Spelling and Punctuation are your best Friends

 

  • A hint to all out there...   In your AUTHOR NOTES, pleeeease do not put "This is rubbish", "I suck" or whatever self-pitying remarks.  Because when I read it I feel like you're fishing for my sympathy.  If you really feel that way - THEN WORK ON IT UNTIL YOU'RE HAPPY AND THEN POST IT.  But hey, its your life... I just hate feeling manipulated.

 

If you like, I am also on MySpace - fantasysmurf.  Where I have lots of my rants and raves in pure essay-ish form.  Sometimes you just have to come out and say it straight!  Wink

 

Poems I have been awarded for on All Poetry.com:

  • Fast Moving Girl - Gold
  • Do Not Disturb - Gold
  • The Mona Lisa Smile - Gold
  • Attack of the Bouncy Smiling Aliens - Gold
  • Like A Box of Chocolates - Gold
  • She Thaws - Silver
  • Lost and Wondering - Silver
  • The Godfather's Betrayer - Bronze
  • Fire Dragon's Roar - Bronze
  • Fear of Flying - Bronze
  • Why the Moon is So Far Away - Bronze
  • Broadening the Mind With Nature - Bronze
  • I am Free - Honourable Mention
  • The Last Stallion - Honourable Win
  • Shae's Sweetheart Script - Honourable Win
  • Letter From Man 2 God - Honourable Mention
  • For a Change - Honourable Mention
  • Eve in the Shadow of Man - Honourable Mention

 

 

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  • Going Forever on September 12, 2008
    I love your page. The very light pink colour suits this. I like your name!!!

    Magikal Fairy Poet
  • Falcon Child on January 25, 2008
    Hey! I think it's cool you're from New Zealand.
  • KaseyL : hey on January 19, 2008
    Thanks for the two comments on my poems "Love is an allusion" and "Criticism and Friendship" I'm also glad you like my quotes n scuh. I put them there for a reason and I expected people not to really read them. Thank you for letting me know that you did.
  • mine4you : missfarrvour/at/y/a/h/o/o /dot/c/o/m on January 13, 2008
    missfarrvour/at/y/a/h/o/o /dot/c/o/m

    My name is Farvourr,i saw your profile today and became intrested in you,i will also like to know you the more,and if you dont mind i will like you to send an email to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom i am.Here is my email address(missfarvourr@yahoo.com) believe we can move from here!I am waiting for your mail to my email address above..(Remeber the distance or colour does not matter even our age difrent because i have something very IMPORTANT to tell you,but love matters alot in life) please contact me with this e-mail address (missfarvourr/at/y/a/h/o/o /dot/c/o/m)

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