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hello. this is me. i love writing peotry, its my way to escape the reality of my life. it takes me away, and i love that feeling. omg i sure do. but  yeah, i am a nothing. im not a prep, gothic, punk, slut, tom boy, nothing. so i can't really explain myself that way. but i like to have fun and hang out with my two best friends.... KFC and Dirty Pop. but yeah they are the greatest! i love them loads!!! yepp yepp i sure do. but yeah. im gonna go now.... maybe i will rite more later. luvs ya ME

and yeah my other screen name is broken-star...


this song i decate it to my mommy!
"Counting On Me"
By: koRn

Why can't you ever back down?
Why can't you just shut your face?
Oh god the feelings I feel
Would get me thrown in a cage
You're the one who's always screaming at me
I'm the one that keeps your lives so care free
What the fuck more do you want me to be?
Why must you do this to me?

Run away, I can't see
Lead the way, make them pay

Counting, on me.
Always hoping I'll be
There for all of your problems
and in turn you're never there for me
You sucked the life out of me
You hate everything you see
I can't take this anymore
I always stay when I should leave

You see the pain in my face
While you keep putting me down
Inside the rage starts to build
You push me I won't go down
You're the one who's always screaming at me
I'm the one that keeps your lives so care free
What the fuck more do you want me to be?
Why must you do this to me?

Run away, I can't see
Lead the way, make them pay

Counting, on me.
Always hoping I'll be
There for all of your problems
and in turn you're never there for me
You sucked the life out of me
You hate everything you see
I can't take this anymore
I always stay when I should leave

Could it really be the day, today?
Could this really make the problems go away?
I'm going to hurt just not in time

Right now!
- I take in all I can now
Right Now!
- You've torn us all part
Right Now!
- There is nothing you can do to stop me
Right now [x9]

Counting, on me.
Always hoping I'll be
There for all of your problems
and in turn you're never there for me
You sucked the life out of me
You hate everything you see
I can't take this anymore
I always stay when I should leave [x2]

  • Last seen on Aug 13 6:34 PM 2004. Member since June 15, 2004.
  • I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 29 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "one after another, thoughts shatter".
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • I have 29 comments, 8 poems

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 8   Show all Search
  • washed ashore,
    tattered and broke.
    21 lines, 3 comments, July 12, 2004. In Personal
  • This happiness I wear,
    is an easy one to tear.
    52 lines, 5 comments, July 8, 2004. In Personal
  • To put the pain inside into words
    would never fully explain
    60 lines, 2 comments, July 6, 2004. In Other
  • I tear shimmers and falls inside,
    my heart screams for serenity.
    20 lines, 5 comments, July 4, 2004. In Personal

Guest Book

1 - 3 of 3
  • nolable on June 18, 2004
    he does love you!! and if he doesnt he will soon! I love ya tons hun!!!!
  • fallingthoughts on June 15, 2004
    thanks ya dirty pop! you are very talented too!!! i love you. lets hope that he does... -
  • on June 15, 2004
    Hey Hun, I love your poems. You are so very talented! I love you tons! -Dirty Pop

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