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EltortedequesoShow poetry

I do not consider myself a poet by any means, I write what i feel, and if it happens to look good, sweet. I know that what I just stated may offend some people, I dont mean that someone who is a poet cant/doesn't write what they feel, im just saying that my writing may try to imitate poetry,and may miss sometimes.

Bah, anyway, the boyfriend got me to try out this site, mainly to enter a contest against him. He beat me,big surprise, and got the gold. So im out to beat him at least once. It's on.

update: Mission Accomplished!

A little about me:

Im 23 years old, born and raised in Hawaii. Went to Southern Oregon University and got my BA in Communications and Video Productions. Eventually want to move to California and get into the Movie Industry, working with Special Effects.

And Im so pissed that Disney is making The Prince of Persia Trilogy!!!

  • Last seen on Nov 4 2:03 PM. Member since April 12, 2008.
  • I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 363 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "We don't like it when you tap the glaaaass".
  • I am a 22 year old guy from Oregon (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm preparing for zombie invasions.
  • Visit my homepage at eltortedequeso.deviantart.com/
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  • I have 363 comments, 4 contests, 73 poems

Poems I'm focused on

My Poetry

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  • Farther than a child's dream
    Away on wings of flying fish
    16 lines, 2 comments, October 25
  • Moments of azure fill my mind
    Overcoming my worries
    17 lines, 1 comment, December 24, 2008
  • Gently, she pushes and pulls the rake,
    Rounding up her tiny, pure white stones,
    21 lines, 2 comments, December 21, 2008
  • before i forget to and miss this
    0 lines, December 20, 2008

Guest Book

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  • Catie Sheeran on April 1
    Hi...just wanted to let you know that I miss you
    hope to see new work up soon...you have so much talent, I hate to ever see you stop writing




    Love your friend
    Catie
  • Catie Sheeran on January 2
    I hope you have a beautiful New Year can't wait to read more amazing work from you in 2009!

  • the.art.of.drowning on September 3, 2008
    haha. love your name. is it a mix of italian and spanish?
  • written-in-ink on August 12, 2008
    so i was looking at your work and its really good.
    i like!
    hahahahh

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