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Eatmydirt

hi I am amanda and i like writing duh so yes I spend most of my time painting,drawing, writing and designing clothes. Also I like comments that are helpful not hurtful.
if you do not like my poem then I would like you to tell me how I can fix it or make it better. What I do not want you to do is tell me how much my poem sucks.
I am here not only to write but, to learn from others.
P.S I do like nice comments as well




  • Last seen on Oct 17 9:42 AM. Member since February 1, 2008.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 100 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "the worst thing a person can say is I give up".
  • I am a 15 year old girl from Massachusetts (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm drawing.
  • I am in the groups Poets Against Child Abuse
  • I have 100 comments, 2 contests, 61 poems

My Poetry

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  • [ No escape in sight ]
    No escape in sight
    Joy falling out
    3 lines, September 13
  • Envy
    Hearts cut the opean cords
    The crosses of sliencee
    4 lines, 2 comments, September 13. In Angst, Other
  • Faded friendship
    You were once the light of my life
    my protector,brother, and friend
    23 lines, August 8. In Personal, Other
  • Traitor/Lover
    As I stair at the face that once held so many emotions a single thought crosses my mind ....
    Not even a thought but a single word a question
    21 lines, August 4. In Abuse, Pain, Other, Dark, Angry

Guest Book

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  • DitzyXXXFreak on March 24, 2008
    nope that's me =) and you are Amanda O'Brien?
  • Redrum Requiem on February 21, 2008
    Okay, I know this is so random, but would your last name happen to be O'Brien? If it isn't you can just brush me off as being crazy, but I was just curious.

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