The One That Got Away.
Reality strikes hard.
It is a merciless predator.
I lost my only love,
I should have watched what I said to her.
I was as cruel, as the pain I now bare.
I'm just a fool, because I wasn't there.
I love you so deeply, though it doesn't matter.
Before your eyes you still can't see me, all I hear is laughter.
The pain burrows deep.
It plunges through my skin.
I'm just another sheep,
without a sheppard- lost in sin.
My name is Jason Artemis. I'm painfully in love with a girl that has forgotten me.
Every thing I ever dreamed of having with her, she is now giving to some one else. That pretty much sums up what I'm going through. A living hell. And I can't even tell her how I feel.
I'm turning 20, on the 28th of july. The only thing I'm looking forward to is being that much closer to death. The pain of losing her went away for a while. But it was still burried deep in my heart. Now it is fighting it's way back into my every thought. I'm in love. And I am not loved.
Reality strikes hard.
It is a merciless predator.
I lost my only love,
I should have watched what I said to her.
I was as cruel, as the pain I now bare.
I'm just a fool, because I wasn't there.
I love you so deeply, though it doesn't matter.
Before your eyes you still can't see me, all I hear is laughter.
The pain burrows deep.
It plunges through my skin.
I'm just another sheep,
without a sheppard- lost in sin.
My name is Jason Artemis. I'm painfully in love with a girl that has forgotten me.
Every thing I ever dreamed of having with her, she is now giving to some one else. That pretty much sums up what I'm going through. A living hell. And I can't even tell her how I feel.
I'm turning 20, on the 28th of july. The only thing I'm looking forward to is being that much closer to death. The pain of losing her went away for a while. But it was still burried deep in my heart. Now it is fighting it's way back into my every thought. I'm in love. And I am not loved.
- Last seen 6 hours ago. Member since January 5, 2005.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 168 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "depressed".
- I am a 19 year old guy from Wisconsin (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm In pain. Dreaming of my lost love.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/madcitimindz
- I have 168 comments, 1 contest, 45 poems
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SimplyNoodle on March 24Thank you for the visit to my contest.
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irishpoet19 on October 30, 2006hey just wanted to say hey and sup? u can email me if u want b/c i already sent u an i m w/my e mail
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Manda Kathryn on October 30, 2006I hope to see a link on your page soon where I can listen to your music .. I enjoy your writing very much and would love to hear your songs recorded
Let me know please, even though I'll be checking back here regularly
Keep writing mate, you have a fantastic talent not many pocess
Stay safe
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-df- on October 25, 2006Gee, I hope you are reading Arthur Rimbaud, Jason. He was your age when he wrote most of his great works. He too has a kick-ass outlook.
A good link:
www.mag4.net/Rimbaud/Poetry. html
you may see yourself somewhere in his work.
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