Dyearwood

I am still very young as you can see therefore some of my poems are fictional. Some of my poems are written based on situations I imagine my self in and how I would feel. I have only written 3 poems since completing high school 3 years ago and those the proposal, stolen dream and heart of a solder. With your encouragement I promise to write more. Sorry for asking for a critical comment but I would just like your opinion so that I can improve my writing. Thank you for reading my poems

Last seen on Oct 8 11:27 AM. Member since June 29, 2006.
I'm a aventurine thought poet for 52 comments.
I am a 19 year old guy (Guyana)
When I'm not writing, I'm a Full time Medical Student.
I have 52 comments, 19 poems

My Poetry

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Standing

I stand before you as a man with flaws,

11 lines, 2 comments, June 23, 2008
Work Slave

I am a slave not bound by shackles

16 lines, June 23, 2008. In Thoughts
Dying Day

From conception we have been prepared / For a day most fear / The foolish think they know when it’s near / But yet when it happens they are caught unprepared. / Some claim they are ready / But the suddenness of its

18 lines, July 11, 2007. In Life
Macho Man

I have taken you for granted many times

45 lines, 3 comments, September 4, 2006. In Sad, Love

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Venessa on September 8, 2006

Guyana huh? my daughter's father is from Guyana. what's it like there?
forever dreaming on August 31, 2006

Was directed to you by my AP sister Blissful Princess aka Sarah Louise Hudson because of a comment u left on her author page. Am gonna check out your work when I get a chance here in the office. Keep scribbling.